|11-24-2007, 12:01 AM||#1 (permalink)|
Join Date: Mar 2006
what do you think? [new]
I don't know why i always feel sick,
i know it's not depression,
i've been through it enough.
Perhaps it's something,
that my mind thinks i'm holding back.
Perhaps i'm keeping something away from myself,
like seperation or bringing something together.
Whatever it may be,
I hope it's found soon,
i want to remain happy,
but to my stomach,
that emotion doesn't happen too much.
im always attempting happiness,
and it's helped.
Along with my happiness,
i have my friends but not my family.
My friends are the ones that keep me going,
and help me find what i am needing.
Just hope I find it soon,
i want to feel cured.
Thanks for the help,
Last edited by under; 11-24-2007 at 12:16 AM. Reason: edited
|11-24-2007, 12:12 AM||#2 (permalink)|
Join Date: Nov 2004
It's good aside from the few things I pointed out.