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Old 11-25-2007, 09:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Are we acquainted, Romeo?
My name is Riddle, but I usually go by Rhetoric
Today I drew an infinity sign and it resembled a fortune cookie
What do you see in me that I can't?




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Old 11-25-2007, 09:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it, except for the first line - it's not bad; I don't know, just odd, I suppose.

It's nice, though.
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Old 11-27-2007, 11:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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wee bit short for a song... but its good stuff
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Old 11-27-2007, 10:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks guys.
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Old 11-27-2007, 10:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Yea good, but first lines odd.
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Old 11-27-2007, 11:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Changed.
Does it sound a little better now?
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