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Old 03-09-2008, 08:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Beauty in liquid

Hey.. this is a poem.. please comment..

If beauty came in liquid,
You’d have and ocean.
If love came in roses,
I’d give you a thousand.

If there was a word,
Which could describe your beauty.
I’d write you a poem,
With words so many.

If I lived,
Just to see an angel,
Then you should know,
I live for you.

If the things I say,
Are just a lie,
Then so is the sun,
And so is the sky.

If Miss Universe pageants
Were just and fair,
Then you would win,
With lots to spare.

B’coz for how I feel
And how I fare,
You’re the one
I love to share.

I want so much
To show you care,
Because friends like you,
Are just so rare.
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Old 03-09-2008, 02:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's kind of cheesy and cliche at times but on some of the verses the amateurness is very charming.
Originally Posted by METALLICA89 View Post
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