Beauty in liquid (show)

weifenglee · 03-09-2008, 08:42 AM

Hey.. this is a poem.. please comment..

If beauty came in liquid,
You’d have and ocean.
If love came in roses,
I’d give you a thousand.

If there was a word,
Which could describe your beauty.
I’d write you a poem,
With words so many.

If I lived,
Just to see an angel,
Then you should know,
I live for you.

If the things I say,
Are just a lie,
Then so is the sun,
And so is the sky.

If Miss Universe pageants
Were just and fair,
Then you would win,
With lots to spare.

B’coz for how I feel
And how I fare,
You’re the one
I love to share.

I want so much
To show you care,
Because friends like you,
Are just so rare.

sleepy jack · 03-09-2008, 02:28 PM

It's kind of cheesy and cliche at times but on some of the verses the amateurness is very charming.

03-09-2008, 08:42 AM	#1 (permalink)
weifenglee Groupie Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 1	Beauty in liquid Hey.. this is a poem.. please comment.. If beauty came in liquid, You’d have and ocean. If love came in roses, I’d give you a thousand. If there was a word, Which could describe your beauty. I’d write you a poem, With words so many. If I lived, Just to see an angel, Then you should know, I live for you. If the things I say, Are just a lie, Then so is the sun, And so is the sky. If Miss Universe pageants Were just and fair, Then you would win, With lots to spare. B’coz for how I feel And how I fare, You’re the one I love to share. I want so much To show you care, Because friends like you, Are just so rare.