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Old 04-13-2008, 01:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default I wrote me a Song, Opinions would be nice

So I wrote this a while ago, but I haven't showed anyone yet, so I figured why not do it here. I don't know you, and you don't know me, so go nuts, if you don't like it, tell me, if you do, or have some advice, I'd love to hear that too. I pictured this mewithoutYou style, so basically, just melodically yelling the lyrics at the top of your lungs. Anyway, here she is:

*Currently Unnamed* - by Me.

He makes no sense, they make no sense
but we make sense
we made sense
or was it all in my head

you wouldn't look at me
you killed us, beat us down
too busy with you, and them
to see me in the crowd that surrounds you
your followers, disciples
looking for that lost treasure
But I see it's just a picture painted on a wall
there's no treasure at all

were we real? Am I crazy?
was it a dream, if it was I don't want to wake up
keep me here, let reality die
I'd leave it all behind for you
but you don't need me
and I'm better off without you

insanity doesn't sound so bad x4
I'm going there
Sail away with me

this makes no sense, they make no sense
but we make sense
(We Made Sense)
was it all in my head
if it was I'm going in after us

The painting is all that they seek
Sorting out lies, no room for the meek
They have no desire to see past that wall
they don't want to see the real you at all
And so I fall
Into this dream

This might be a repost from the members journal, but whatever.. any ideas for a name would be appreciated too!
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Old 04-13-2008, 05:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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cliche cliche
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