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Old 02-25-2009, 03:17 PM   #41 (permalink)
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Drugs don't kill people. People kill themselves using drugs. If you want to know the real reasons drugs are bad, just ask an articulate, emotionally intelligent addict why he/she keeps going on runs.
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Old 02-25-2009, 09:17 PM   #42 (permalink)
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When did I ever imply drugs kill people? In fact, someone almost was killed while they were on drugs, which is what you just said.

I don't see where this is going, give me your green card.
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Laser beams, psychedelic hats, and for some reason kittens. Surrel reminds me of kittens.
^if you wanna know perfection that's it, you dumb shits
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Old 03-20-2009, 10:59 PM   #43 (permalink)
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I wrote this friend for a dear friend (Stephanie AKA Stef Heezy) whom is leaving my school and i will kill myself later but first! Here's a song.

ALL CAPS IN THIS BITCH LIKE A COMIC BOOK
JUST LOOK WHAT WE TOOK FROM THE GOD DAMNED NOOK
JUST WAIT FOR THE HOOK JUST WAIT FOR THE HOOK
JUST WAIT FOR US TO GET THE MOTHERFUCKIN CRACK COOKED
WE MASTER CHEFS NOT FUCKIN COOKS
THE COPS THOUGHT THEY’D CATCH US BUT WE JUST SNOOK
WE CROOKS WE FUCK YOU IN THE ASS
WE REELIN IN MONEY LIKE WE REELIN IN BASS
WE DESTROY Y’ALL LIKE WE DON’T DESTROY MASS
WE DESTROY Y’ALL FOR SOME FUCKIN CASH
YOU SCARED MOTHERFUCKER THEN GIVE US THE STASH
BEATS LIKE POTATOS BECAUSE THEY ALL MASHED
HOOD GOT HULKED CUZ THE HOOD ON SMASH
YOU WANNA SEE TOMORROW THEN BITCH TALK FAST
WE’LL LEAVE YOU IN THE CLINIC THE THE FULL BODY CAST
LIKE KANE YOU FUCKERS GOT UNMASKED
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST ABOUT TO GET FUCKED
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST BOUT TO GET BUCKED
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST ABOUT TO DUCK
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES SO GO GET FUCKED
WE FUCK LIKE DICKS SO WE GONNA GET SUCKED
WE FUCK GOVERNMENT WHEN THE GOVERNMENT’S CORRUPT
WE TALK IN A MONOTONE LIKE BILLY CRUDUP
WE GOIN TO WAR SO WE ABOUT TO GET CREWED UP
WE GOIN TO WAR SO WE ABOUT TO GET SCREWD UP
WE NEED TO TAKE A REST SO WE GONNNA RENEW UP
THAT’S YOUR CURTAIN CALL SO YOU BOUT TO GET CUED UP
WE’LL SEE YOU IN HELL WHEN OUR TIME IS USED UP
WE WOULD GO TO HEAVEN BUT WE SAID “WE REFUSE UP”
WE ABOUT TO GO SAIYAN BECAUSE WE BOUT TO GET FUSED UP.
THIS IS THE SIXTEENTH BAR THAT WE ABOUT TO MUSE UP
WE’D LIKE TO STAY AND EAT BUT THEY SAID THAT THE STEW’S UP.
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Laser beams, psychedelic hats, and for some reason kittens. Surrel reminds me of kittens.
^if you wanna know perfection that's it, you dumb shits
Spoiler for guess what:
|i am a heron i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans
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Old 03-21-2009, 03:48 AM   #44 (permalink)
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That was cool.
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Old 03-21-2009, 01:16 PM   #45 (permalink)
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Thank you very much, I thought people wouldn't like it because of how absolutely raw it is, but I'm glad you did, I actually care about your opinion. At least a little bit, anyway.
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Laser beams, psychedelic hats, and for some reason kittens. Surrel reminds me of kittens.
^if you wanna know perfection that's it, you dumb shits
Spoiler for guess what:
|i am a heron i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans
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Old 03-21-2009, 01:33 PM   #46 (permalink)
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God damnit this is great.

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YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST ABOUT TO GET ****ED
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST BOUT TO GET BUCKED
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES JUST ABOUT TO DUCK
YOU LOOK LIKE PUSSIES SO GO GET ****ED
WE **** LIKE ****S SO WE GONNA GET SUCKED
I lol'd at this though.
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Old 03-21-2009, 01:40 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Thank you sirrrr, I'm so happy! Now if I can get Kirby, jacklovezhimself, and some other rap lover to come in here and approve of this I will be so proud.

Nah but for real, I thank both you gentlemen with my highest... whatever you use to thank people with.
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Laser beams, psychedelic hats, and for some reason kittens. Surrel reminds me of kittens.
^if you wanna know perfection that's it, you dumb shits
Spoiler for guess what:
|i am a heron i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans

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Old 03-21-2009, 03:23 PM   #48 (permalink)
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Not bad buddy, I think most of it is cool, Ive never been a fan of lyrics that repeat themselves over a couple of times but other than than I liked it, cheers.
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Old 03-21-2009, 09:01 PM   #49 (permalink)
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I'm glad you liked it, I thought the repetition was necessary (or at least good for the song) but I understand and am glad you enjoyed the rest.

I'm also glad no one's busted in here and been like "THIS IS WHY RAP IS WHAAAAKKK".
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Laser beams, psychedelic hats, and for some reason kittens. Surrel reminds me of kittens.
^if you wanna know perfection that's it, you dumb shits
Spoiler for guess what:
|i am a heron i ahev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans
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Old 03-21-2009, 09:16 PM   #50 (permalink)
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I'm glad you liked it, I thought the repetition was necessary (or at least good for the song) but I understand and am glad you enjoyed the rest.

I'm also glad no one's busted in here and been like "THIS IS WHY RAP IS WHAAAAKKK".
No way man. If you woulda started rapping like Lil Wayne I might have called you out, hahahahaha, just kidding. I get bored sometime and try to write some rhymes myself but nothing good ever comes of it.
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