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Old 11-25-2008, 07:34 PM   #21 (permalink)
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I guess this song is about animals..??
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:15 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Yeah it's really metaphor to how penguins interact with sea lions...
violently, i assume.
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Old 11-26-2008, 07:10 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Yep, deffo enough rubbish in the thread so far to write a few lyrics :P
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:37 AM   #24 (permalink)
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violently, i assume.
uh...sure...
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:40 AM   #25 (permalink)
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Dynamics= Loud - Soft
Perspective= The Turtles half penguin lover.
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:41 AM   #26 (permalink)
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I'll give the opening line a shot....

As the sun shown down on the great green plain.
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Old 11-26-2008, 10:43 AM   #27 (permalink)
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My favorite lyrics I wrote is:

"The cigarette burned away minutes of it's life,
And years of mine."

If someone is serious about a collective songwriting thing, we can use that.
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Old 11-26-2008, 11:06 AM   #28 (permalink)
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My favorite lyrics I wrote is:

"The cigarette burned away minutes of it's life,
And years of mine."

If someone is serious about a collective songwriting thing, we can use that.
That's f*cking rad!
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Old 11-26-2008, 02:31 PM   #29 (permalink)
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I'll give the opening line a shot....

As the sun shown down on the great green plain.
Eh, not a good opener.. try again?
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Old 11-26-2008, 02:51 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Is it first person perspective or third person?
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