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Old 11-24-2008, 08:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Video Song for your review

This is the first of many to come, please let me know what you think.

youtube.com/watch?v=0qhcc3Yi7o4
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Old 11-25-2008, 02:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very cool. I enjoyed it alot.

I'd say just get the guitar line down a bit better and than record it and sell it on Audiosparx.com

It's a great website for that kind of music, just gotta sign up and describe it.
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Old 11-25-2008, 05:31 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like that! I agree with Sonace. At a few parts, the guitar was a bit rough like you had slightly messed up, but that's all I would really change. Oh, and if you have any ideas for brief vocals, for it is a bit repeating, that would be cool...Like have some "Oh's" and "Ah's" lightly overlayed, and maybe one thing you say said over and over at different parts.
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