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Old 01-15-2009, 07:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Stillborn Society (Metal Lyrics)

Stillborn Society


Holding down the little ones

And bleeding their rights

So add another bar to the cage

Depleat the will to fight


Wounds that will never heal

How is this pro-civilization?

Show me proof of a better reality

Elusive as it seems


Dead before they've opened up their eyes

Bleed the scars of a stillborn society


Morality of a nation burned

Beat down and left for dead

Cast aside; segregation

Who decides where we lay our heads?


Destroying the enemy

The riddance of your fears

Fighting terror with terror

As no conclusion draws near


Dead before they've opened up their eyes

Bleed the scars of a stillborn society


Spoken:

"There's no elation

Black with degration

There is no hope"


The deaf are still leading the blind

One thousand furies are screaming out

Bleed the scars of a stillborn society


***yes the anti-rhymer did some rhyming. There is a recording of this song on my band's myspace page for those of you interested in hearing it.

I cannot post a URL yet so ww.myspace.com/deathreckoning you add the other w

(a recording of Through The Eyes Of A Murderer is also there)
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Old 01-17-2009, 01:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Not bad for your style.
Not my cup of tea. Good job though.
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Old 01-17-2009, 01:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Pretty good, man. Keep it up.
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Old 01-24-2009, 05:46 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Good lyrics, but little rhyming(I like rhyming). I especially like this beginning part:
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Holding down the little ones

And bleeding their rights

So add another bar to the cage

Depleat the will to fight
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