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Old 02-02-2009, 04:26 AM   #11 (permalink)
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nice song.. keep it up....
hehe write more songs... kk??
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Old 02-02-2009, 01:12 PM   #12 (permalink)
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IMHO- nice try...but

1) too angry.

2) too cliché.

3) too contrived.


Solution:

Try to examine the reasons behind the strong emotions instead of concentrating on a style that might not be your true voice...unless you simply want to do do something that has been done before. Also, I will concede that maybe we need to hear this on a track to "get it"
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Old 02-02-2009, 01:17 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Waste of time? :P Lol
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Old 02-02-2009, 02:15 PM   #14 (permalink)
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I think it's good, maybe too much for one song?

spread it out into like, four songs, get a decent beat, couple of guitarists and maybe some anti depressants?
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Old 02-11-2009, 12:41 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Yeahhh.........**** this.

You just need your ass beat by your mom some more.
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Old 02-11-2009, 12:44 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Yeahhh.........**** this.

You just need your ass beat by your mom some more.
I have to agree. But to be fair, garbage like this is pretty common in rap. *Sits and waits for the hate mail*
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Old 02-11-2009, 04:58 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Sounds like one long Eminem ripoff.
Exactly my thoughts.
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Old 02-15-2009, 11:26 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Oright look, I have a lot of ****ing **** on my chest;
a lot of ****ed up ****.
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If i'm deciphering the "*****"'s correctly, then the first is fucking and the second is shit and if you look at this whole rap from the perspective of someone who's been an unwilling member of a scat video it's pretty alright.
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Old 02-21-2009, 11:45 AM   #19 (permalink)
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swearing gets you nowhere; ease off on language. when half your words are bleeped no one even cares about flow they just sit there and wonder what ur even talking about
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Old 02-21-2009, 01:11 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Exactly my thoughts.
Well, i suppose you call yourself trend killer for a reason. but i have to agree that rap generally, GENERALLY, DOES suck.
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