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Old 02-26-2009, 06:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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ok i was thinking of for my band im a screamer and i want to do something NOBODY has done i mean NOOOOOBODYYYY so i was in school the other day and i heard this girl sining like the R&B singers sing like you know how that is i was thinking start off a song real slow and quite with her singing then me in the back ground doing a screaming voice over...then just all hell screams and double kicks everywhere....idk but i think that would sound really really cool and i don't think anyone has done this before...any comments?
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Old 02-26-2009, 08:20 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Brokencyde did it in their song I'm Sorry I Am.... It sounded like first rate dog ****.
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ok...brokencyde are you serious im not talking about scene kid bull shxt
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if you're concerned about not being part of 'scene kid BS' then you're letting that same scene BS control your tastes. indirect attention is still attention.
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Old 03-24-2009, 06:28 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Default numbing the pain

Dreams torn to pieces, broken like glass
Hope faded away, withered like leaves
Not knowing is blessing, ignorance the only protection

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Nothing is numbing my pain
The fragments of my faith
Became the blade in my hand
Just darkness my eyes see
Pushed me to the end of all dead-end-streets

A curse - cannot lie to myself
I'm doomed - cannot silence my heart
Fear is the tool, conformity our medicine

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How can I smile as this age dies, like everybody else
Dancing around the fire, that burns this world

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Cannot bend down, I would just break
I hate myself for playing their game
Parents poison their children, never teach them to question
If it only wasn't for this certainty in me
I am a giant in their tiny world



^^best ever
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I take it you're an angsty teen?
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I take it you're an angsty teen?


nahhhhhhh actually im a very happy person
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Old 03-24-2009, 07:32 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Then what could you possibly find so alluring about these lyrics? Could you maybe go into your feelings about them a bit further instead of just posting them with no reference to where they come from or an actual elaboration as to why we should pay attention to them? What was your intention with making this thread? Why did you put it in the general forums? Etc etc...
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first off because it has to do with music in "genral" and if there is a lyrics thred please direct me in that area please.
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Old 03-24-2009, 07:42 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Well, that answers one of my questions. So, what about "numbing the pain" makes it the "best ever"? Is there some pain you need numbing? Having you tried aspirin? Or is it something more deep, something that hurts your adolescent soul? Tell us more about this "pain" of yours, mm?
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