Stone Birds' Songwriting Journal
I need a name for this, please help.
P.s. i didn't write the second verse, so if sounds stupid don't blame me. |
John Walks
My Latest Song it has a very slow-tempo, and a bass drum. no guitar yet though. also i need to rename it so if you guys can help go ahead.
John, the hero |
Well, a recurring theme is colors...
So maybe go with Tinted Red or something of the sort. |
treading on.
the ground is stained with red. idk :/ |
what youre getting at is not clear to me. . .be it war or something else. a discription of the color of the whatever-it-is might be a functional title. but something that would apply only to the subject, or at least strongly hint. i agree with maybe "tinted red"
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Hmmm... not sure if it fits in with where you're coming from but i'm coming around to a name somewhere along the lines of 'moving still', i've always been a fan of paradoxical cryptic song names and for some reason i feel that it fits this one pretty well...not sure if i've been of any assistance but its a thought ;)
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Universal Breaker
You got lost in the atmosphere It's All i got so far i need a lot of help. the song is supposed to have a pop-blues sorta feel to it |
(Need something to rhyme with hole) -- > Soul,whole, stole?
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You got lost in the atmosphereDoes that line work? |
yes nice:)
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