these are songs you guys look at my songs!!!

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 07-30-2009, 12:34 PM

Cool stuff.

Quote:

"If I had a friend they’d tell me to gain
Some weight, get some shuteye
And my priorities straight
Thankfully that’s not the case
I’m free to be a reprobate
Who chronically masturbates
And sleeps well past noon
Doesn’t bathe and eats peanutbutter
Right off of the spoon."

I liked this bit and found it particularly humorous.

asshat · 07-31-2009, 03:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Conan

Cool stuff.

I liked this bit and found it particularly humorous.

thanks man.

I'm trying to break out of the sarcastic prick mold as far as lyrics go but I'm pretty lazy.

Nicktarist · 08-11-2009, 09:14 PM

Quote:

Tard

you have an interesting sense of humor--and very ironic at that. You know how to write, that much is true, but you have to stray away from words whose meaning can be... illiterate in a sense. When I hear the word tard, I think of that little ******* kid who live in my nieghborhood when I was 7 calling everyone a tard--in fact, he's the only one in any sort of recent memory I've heard use the word.

That's my problem with it, but other than that, your poems are quite interesting... just never put this to hardcore, grind core, or any of that cheesy hard rock that licenses itself to the influence of Zepplin (of course, none are close to Led in any way--which is why it's a genre that has been exhausted in my mind.) Your too talented a writer to fall in the wake of something musically that's already been done and redone enough to've made it's point already.

peace,
-nick

Arya Stark · 10-05-2009, 06:22 PM

Are you writing to a beat? Or a song? Or what?

asshat · 10-06-2009, 12:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AwwSugar

Are you writing to a beat? Or a song? Or what?

I honestly have no clue....the neutrality song was sort of meant to taper off like that at the end.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 01:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asshat

I honestly have no clue....the neutrality song was sort of meant to taper off like that at the end.

Taper off?

asshat · 10-06-2009, 01:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AwwSugar

Taper off?

I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?

that's the tapering off I guess.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 01:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asshat

I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?

that's the tapering off I guess.

I really like your style of writing.

Annissette · 10-06-2009, 01:31 AM

You have supreme music writing skills. No boring repeats that sound as if your head is stuck between a rail.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 01:41 AM

Just edit your posts.

You don't have to post something new everytime.

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