these are songs you guys look at my songs!!!

Annissette · 10-06-2009, 12:35 AM

It's disgusting(?) how many pigs you kill where you live. But, nothing to eat. Marvin *** is good for this.

Marvin's name starts with G and ends with y, the songs Mercy, mercy and I heard it through the grapevine start a collection of intriguing or up beat soul tunes. It has three letters that evidently match the censored description of a hormone imbalance.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 12:41 AM

Just edit your posts.

You don't have to post something new everytime.

asshat · 10-06-2009, 12:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AwwSugar

Taper off?

I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?

that's the tapering off I guess.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 12:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asshat

I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?

that's the tapering off I guess.

I really like your style of writing.

Nicktarist · 10-06-2009, 03:13 PM

Screw you Asshat for being better than me.

It doesn't take much to be better than me.

Still... *sigh* as a note, you don't really have to sing this. You can go the route of the hot snakes and just scream it like your trying to start a riot. I love the Hot Snakes.

peace,
-nick

asshat · 10-06-2009, 04:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nicktarist

Screw you Asshat for being better than me.

It doesn't take much to be better than me.

Still... *sigh* as a note, you don't really have to sing this. You can go the route of the hot snakes and just scream it like your trying to start a riot. I love the Hot Snakes.

peace,
-nick

....no you're better, half of my stuff is plagiarized unknowingly.
Thank you though.

...my way of singing is to speak with a slur so people can't make out what I'm saying.

Arya Stark · 10-06-2009, 05:35 PM

Record it!!!

asshat · 10-17-2009, 08:38 PM

....welcome to the terrordome!!!
Here are more poems, I wrote them even faster.

__________________________________________________ _______

Don't underestimate
The pain
Of forgetting the s#it
That was said 4 seconds ago
This problem has being going
On for five years or more
When I blacked out,
Declared me legally dead
But later revived
They gave me a clean bill of health
Or touched in the head
But at least I survived

I don't need to explain
What I said
The syntax is there
So who the hell cares
About my inflection
When I hear a rainbow
I got an erection
__________________________________________________ ______________
'For time begin
We dance in the thyme
We dance in the wind
We had no clothes
Made love in streams
Before I became
A big hate machine

The man came
Stuck a frown on my face
Now I am just an engine of hate

Now I am out to destroy
All the music I once enjoy
Now I smash
And Destroy your lute
And kill all the colours
And spit in your flute
Now I make, I make
You feel shame
For wearing no clothes
And dancing all day

Now I am an engine of hate
Now I am, I am totally lame
__________________________________________________ ________

I am inclined to fail
That's why I'm still here
Cause the plans were derailed
I took the right dose
And I drank lots of wine
But I woke up for work
Just around the same time
And time is money
Even if I'm seeing s@it
And acting funnily
I did call in sick
He didn't think it was legit
Some parts
I shouldn't have omit
__________________________________________________ __________

I like the sound
And it get's me off
Cause I'm digging a hole
When I'm hoeing the grass
Cause I like the look
And feel of it
When I'm sayin' it
For the sake of saying
more s_it
It's as g@y as a two dollar pistol
It's as vain as the leaf on the branch
Was lame as 4 dollar whore
Before the ides of march
Burned a hole in the floor
And tore a rip in your pants.

________________________________________________

It's me and mine
That's you and yours
Just get it straight
Don't touch my stuff
And it'll be great
When you mess with my stuff
You send a message
And the message is such
that i get the impression
that you only care about things
and not about other human beings
And you slapped me about
cause I'm not up to snuff
when you mess with my stuff.

kouki · 10-18-2009, 08:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asshat

_____________________________
Hands that kill

Hands
These god damn hands
Have killed many a man,man
Hands that kill
See these hands
Killed a man
Performed surgery
Delivered a new born baby
Touched the face of a lady
When these hands kill again
I can't be certain
But for certain they will kill a man,man
__________________
Red Meat

No more red meat
No more privacy in the
World of the 23rd century
There ain't no more god
Three to a pod
Woman/man and single child
That's all that is allowed
And a paste is all the rations that are alloted
And it tastes so shitty
But's thats all that we eat
Cause there's no more red meat
In the 23rd century AD

And the chips in the brains
For prevention of thoughts
Of thoughts about smashing the state
Cause it's been so god damn long
So very long
Since they had a steak on their plate.
___________________________
Prison of the mind

Make your mind a prison
It's trip to turn your brain
Into a penitentiary
And where you go
nobody knows

You be the warden and executioner
In your mind
Nobody comes inside
Nobody dares
The walls are covered with slime
And the stench of the ages
Before you die
Just make a trip
To the prison of the mind
___________________________________

I really liked hands that kill,make that a song like now!I would probly add a cool chorus and thats about it. I found it humorous,is it suppose to be? Especially the part of "have killed many a man,man" (pretty much the second man)

The other two songs I quoted I thought where good too.

Arya Stark · 10-18-2009, 09:56 AM

Eh, I'm not as fond of these poems as I was with the other ones. I didn't feel a beat, and the songs writing wasn't as creative. I'm a little disappointed, sorry.

10-17-2009, 08:38 PM	#28 (permalink)
asshat king of sex Join Date: May 2009 Location: canada Posts: 331	....welcome to the terrordome!!! Here are more poems, I wrote them even faster. __________________________________________________ _______ Don't underestimate The pain Of forgetting the s#it That was said 4 seconds ago This problem has being going On for five years or more When I blacked out, Declared me legally dead But later revived They gave me a clean bill of health Or touched in the head But at least I survived I don't need to explain What I said The syntax is there So who the hell cares About my inflection When I hear a rainbow I got an erection __________________________________________________ ______________ 'For time begin We dance in the thyme We dance in the wind We had no clothes Made love in streams Before I became A big hate machine The man came Stuck a frown on my face Now I am just an engine of hate Now I am out to destroy All the music I once enjoy Now I smash And Destroy your lute And kill all the colours And spit in your flute Now I make, I make You feel shame For wearing no clothes And dancing all day Now I am an engine of hate Now I am, I am totally lame __________________________________________________ ________ I am inclined to fail That's why I'm still here Cause the plans were derailed I took the right dose And I drank lots of wine But I woke up for work Just around the same time And time is money Even if I'm seeing s@it And acting funnily I did call in sick He didn't think it was legit Some parts I shouldn't have omit __________________________________________________ __________ I like the sound And it get's me off Cause I'm digging a hole When I'm hoeing the grass Cause I like the look And feel of it When I'm sayin' it For the sake of saying more s_it It's as g@y as a two dollar pistol It's as vain as the leaf on the branch Was lame as 4 dollar whore Before the ides of march Burned a hole in the floor And tore a rip in your pants. ________________________________________________ It's me and mine That's you and yours Just get it straight Don't touch my stuff And it'll be great When you mess with my stuff You send a message And the message is such that i get the impression that you only care about things and not about other human beings And you slapped me about cause I'm not up to snuff when you mess with my stuff. __________________ Rye Catcher II: Electric Boogaloo http://oldhickory666.blogspot.com/

10-06-2009, 12:35 AM	#21 (permalink)
Annissette Groupie Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 18	It's disgusting(?) how many pigs you kill where you live. But, nothing to eat. Marvin *** is good for this. Marvin's name starts with G and ends with y, the songs Mercy, mercy and I heard it through the grapevine start a collection of intriguing or up beat soul tunes. It has three letters that evidently match the censored description of a hormone imbalance.