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Old 10-06-2009, 12:35 AM   #21 (permalink)
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It's disgusting(?) how many pigs you kill where you live. But, nothing to eat. Marvin *** is good for this.

Marvin's name starts with G and ends with y, the songs Mercy, mercy and I heard it through the grapevine start a collection of intriguing or up beat soul tunes. It has three letters that evidently match the censored description of a hormone imbalance.
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Old 10-06-2009, 12:41 AM   #22 (permalink)
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Just edit your posts.

You don't have to post something new everytime.
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Old 10-06-2009, 12:52 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Taper off?

I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?


that's the tapering off I guess.
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Old 10-06-2009, 12:53 AM   #24 (permalink)
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I don't have the authority
To form an opinion
Doesn't concern me
Don't give a S)it
Could not give a care
Or take a f*ck
Or meaning
Considering that thing
You were talking
bout
doing
What?


that's the tapering off I guess.
I really like your style of writing.
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Old 10-06-2009, 03:13 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Screw you Asshat for being better than me.

It doesn't take much to be better than me.

Still... *sigh* as a note, you don't really have to sing this. You can go the route of the hot snakes and just scream it like your trying to start a riot. I love the Hot Snakes.

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Old 10-06-2009, 04:49 PM   #26 (permalink)
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Screw you Asshat for being better than me.

It doesn't take much to be better than me.

Still... *sigh* as a note, you don't really have to sing this. You can go the route of the hot snakes and just scream it like your trying to start a riot. I love the Hot Snakes.

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....no you're better, half of my stuff is plagiarized unknowingly.
Thank you though.

...my way of singing is to speak with a slur so people can't make out what I'm saying.
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Old 10-06-2009, 05:35 PM   #27 (permalink)
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Record it!!!
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Old 10-17-2009, 08:38 PM   #28 (permalink)
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....welcome to the terrordome!!!
Here are more poems, I wrote them even faster.

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Don't underestimate
The pain
Of forgetting the s#it
That was said 4 seconds ago
This problem has being going
On for five years or more
When I blacked out,
Declared me legally dead
But later revived
They gave me a clean bill of health
Or touched in the head
But at least I survived

I don't need to explain
What I said
The syntax is there
So who the hell cares
About my inflection
When I hear a rainbow
I got an erection
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'For time begin
We dance in the thyme
We dance in the wind
We had no clothes
Made love in streams
Before I became
A big hate machine

The man came
Stuck a frown on my face
Now I am just an engine of hate

Now I am out to destroy
All the music I once enjoy
Now I smash
And Destroy your lute
And kill all the colours
And spit in your flute
Now I make, I make
You feel shame
For wearing no clothes
And dancing all day

Now I am an engine of hate
Now I am, I am totally lame
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I am inclined to fail
That's why I'm still here
Cause the plans were derailed
I took the right dose
And I drank lots of wine
But I woke up for work
Just around the same time
And time is money
Even if I'm seeing s@it
And acting funnily
I did call in sick
He didn't think it was legit
Some parts
I shouldn't have omit
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I like the sound
And it get's me off
Cause I'm digging a hole
When I'm hoeing the grass
Cause I like the look
And feel of it
When I'm sayin' it
For the sake of saying
more s_it
It's as g@y as a two dollar pistol
It's as vain as the leaf on the branch
Was lame as 4 dollar whore
Before the ides of march
Burned a hole in the floor
And tore a rip in your pants.

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It's me and mine
That's you and yours
Just get it straight
Don't touch my stuff
And it'll be great
When you mess with my stuff
You send a message
And the message is such
that i get the impression
that you only care about things
and not about other human beings
And you slapped me about
cause I'm not up to snuff
when you mess with my stuff.
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Old 10-18-2009, 08:30 AM   #29 (permalink)
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Hands that kill

Hands
These god damn hands
Have killed many a man,man
Hands that kill
See these hands
Killed a man
Performed surgery
Delivered a new born baby
Touched the face of a lady
When these hands kill again
I can't be certain
But for certain they will kill a man,man
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Red Meat

No more red meat
No more privacy in the
World of the 23rd century
There ain't no more god
Three to a pod
Woman/man and single child
That's all that is allowed
And a paste is all the rations that are alloted
And it tastes so shitty
But's thats all that we eat
Cause there's no more red meat
In the 23rd century AD

And the chips in the brains
For prevention of thoughts
Of thoughts about smashing the state
Cause it's been so god damn long
So very long
Since they had a steak on their plate.
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Prison of the mind

Make your mind a prison
It's trip to turn your brain
Into a penitentiary
And where you go
nobody knows

You be the warden and executioner
In your mind
Nobody comes inside
Nobody dares
The walls are covered with slime
And the stench of the ages
Before you die
Just make a trip
To the prison of the mind
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I really liked hands that kill,make that a song like now!I would probly add a cool chorus and thats about it. I found it humorous,is it suppose to be? Especially the part of "have killed many a man,man" (pretty much the second man)

The other two songs I quoted I thought where good too.
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Old 10-18-2009, 09:56 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Eh, I'm not as fond of these poems as I was with the other ones. I didn't feel a beat, and the songs writing wasn't as creative. I'm a little disappointed, sorry.
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