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bogey_j 12-11-2009 02:20 AM

This Poem Is Probably Going To Go Over Your Head..
 
but here goes. it's lyrics for an experimental song i'm writing. it's called 'Do fish dream?'
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My friend is a fish
he lives in my room.
his fin is a cloud.
he sees me when I sleep

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Schizotypic 12-11-2009 02:34 AM

Is this a poem or is it a riddle?

mr dave 12-11-2009 02:07 PM

people are going to think you're singing about this

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_F2wMsozqNI...us-fish_01.jpg

bogey_j 12-11-2009 02:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mr dave (Post 782800)
people are going to think you're singing about this

then they would be wrong

Janszoon 12-11-2009 02:41 PM

I think the song is about tennis.

mr dave 12-11-2009 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bogey_j (Post 782838)
then they would be wrong

wrong or not it's the audience and not the artist that determines what creations are really about.

bogey_j 12-11-2009 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mr dave (Post 783038)
wrong or not it's the audience and not the artist that determines what creations are really about.

I understand that, but you must be some jesus freak if the only thing you got from the lyrics was jesus

Janszoon 12-11-2009 06:50 PM

So what is it about?

bogey_j 12-11-2009 07:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon (Post 783056)
So what is it about?

I wrote it about my pet fish named carl

HotFunkColdPunk 12-11-2009 07:37 PM

hehe That's deep.


Is there more to it?


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