The Lyrical Saga Of SljSlj

Sljslj · 04-29-2010, 06:29 PM

Check it. I think every metal band (I am, by the way, forming a band and soon I'll start throwing actual tracks on here) should have a tribute/anthem for the genre. This is mine.
Some might see it as a cliche, but I think others may see the complete opposite of a cliche in this song. Maybe si, maybe no. Just check it and, as always, your thoughts are more than welcome.

L.A.D.F.M.

Live and die... for metal. (metal)
Losers, aliens, demons, ****in martyrs.
Lost and decimated for mankind.
We live and die for metal. (metal)

This is where the new age meets the age-old.
A crosswalk for those with no destination.
A headstone for those hellbent on mutilation.
Come together, we are the pioneers of a brutal nation.

Live and die... for metal. (metal)
Losers, aliens, demons, ****in martyrs.*
Lost and decimated for mankind.
We live and die for metal. (metal)

This is the ****in metal revolution.
This is the next step in our evolution.
You already know it ain't noise pollution.
It's the flame that burns your constitution.
The wrecking ball for all your institutions.

Live and die... for metal. (metal)
Losers, aliens, demons, ****in martyrs.
Lost and decimated for mankind.
We live and die for metal. (metal)

(guitar solo #1?)

Blood.
Bleed for metal.
Flood.
Drown in my voice.
Blood.
Bleed for metal.
Flood.
Drown in my voice.
Blood.

We live and die for metal.
Limp around the darkness for a millenium.
Lash and destroy forty million.
Live and die for metal.

(solo #2?)

Live and die.. for metal.
Losers, aliens, demons, ****in martyrs.
Lost and decimated for mankind.
We live and die for metal.

Sljslj · 05-01-2010, 02:41 PM

So a drummer, an amazing guitarist, and I are working on covers of Sabbath's Supernaut and Korn's Freak On A Leash. If it turns out well, I'll post it here.

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 05-02-2010, 12:41 PM

sweet. I'd like to listen.

Sljslj · 05-02-2010, 09:04 PM

So this song... This ****in song. Every time I finished it, I'd accidentally paste something over it (3 ****in times, I'm stupid lol) and got to be real frustrating. But I needed to write this and it turned out better than I couldve hoped. The story is exagerated, but is based on real events. She is a lesbian, I think that's an important thing to mention. Check it, comment, you know the drill.

HER FINAL WORDS.

She epitomizes torment.
Everyone looks down on her.
Because her love is not conventional.
Her sanity's demise: slow, but eventual.

The woman is a fighter.
But she holds too much inside her.
One day she is bound to burst.
She cannot control this curse.

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?

Her mouth remains shut, but in those eyes...
In those beautiful eyes, I see all I need know.
On this day, she leaves this world of lies.
Before she goes, she will give her those ****s a show.

Begging.
I'm begging her.
Don't be stupid.
Trying.
To save her life.
Bitch, don't be stupid.
Sorry.
Sorry I couldn't do more.

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?

She pulls the shotty from her purse.
She takes the antogonists first.
Then she sticks the barrel down her throat.
In her hand lies her final words, a note...

Why do we hate...
That which we don't understand?
Why does our fate...
Lie in society's dirty hands?

Sljslj · 05-02-2010, 09:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Conan

sweet. I'd like to listen.

The best part is gonna be my variation of the weird grunting thing the Korn guy does. It's going to be intense.

Sljslj · 05-02-2010, 09:11 PM

Any thoughts on my two newest lyrics? I know I ask for opinions alot, but sometimes I'm not sure if I'm a good writer.

Sljslj · 05-03-2010, 08:25 AM

TIME TO REWIND.

Sick of everything I've become.
Sick of feeling like I'm the only one.
Every time I throw away that 20.
I'm losing so much than money.
Does self-inflicted trauma justify this cheap high?

I've walked with kings and demons.
I've touched the surface of a thousand suns...
If only within my mind.
It's time for me to rewind.

The road forks up ahead.
I've never seen anything like it.
There's a hundred directions.*
And ninety-nine are dead ends.
Only one leads to ressurection.

How did I get here...
Without shedding a single tear?
The end is always near, but I can prolong my time.
As long I keep my head clear, purify my mind.
It's time to rewind.

jodyWayne · 05-03-2010, 12:23 PM

Wow. "Her Final Words" very powerfull.
Would make a good video.
You were right. I really like it.

Keep it up,
jodyW

Sljslj · 05-04-2010, 06:22 AM

Thank you very much, Jody. I don't get alot of people leaving replys here and I certainly don't get alot of positive comments. Altho Conan stops by from time to time to criticize, it's mostly just me here. Anyway, I'm glad ou like it.
Keep on keepin' on jody.

~~James~~ · 05-04-2010, 06:27 AM

Just because your not getting replies doesn't mean people aren't reading, I like it.

04-29-2010, 06:29 PM	#61 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	Check it. I think every metal band (I am, by the way, forming a band and soon I'll start throwing actual tracks on here) should have a tribute/anthem for the genre. This is mine. Some might see it as a cliche, but I think others may see the complete opposite of a cliche in this song. Maybe si, maybe no. Just check it and, as always, your thoughts are more than welcome. L.A.D.F.M. Live and die... for metal. (metal) Losers, aliens, demons, **in martyrs. Lost and decimated for mankind. We live and die for metal. (metal) This is where the new age meets the age-old. A crosswalk for those with no destination. A headstone for those hellbent on mutilation. Come together, we are the pioneers of a brutal nation. Live and die... for metal. (metal) Losers, aliens, demons, *in martyrs. Lost and decimated for mankind. We live and die for metal. (metal) This is the **in metal revolution. This is the next step in our evolution. You already know it ain't noise pollution. It's the flame that burns your constitution. The wrecking ball for all your institutions. Live and die... for metal. (metal) Losers, aliens, demons, in martyrs. Lost and decimated for mankind. We live and die for metal. (metal) (guitar solo #1?) Blood. Bleed for metal. Flood. Drown in my voice. Blood. Bleed for metal. Flood. Drown in my voice. Blood. We live and die for metal. Limp around the darkness for a millenium. Lash and destroy forty million. Live and die for metal. (solo #2?) Live and die.. for metal. Losers, aliens, demons, *in martyrs. Lost and decimated for mankind. We live and die for metal. Last edited by Sljslj; 05-01-2010 at 02:36 PM. Reason: Typo*

05-02-2010, 09:04 PM	#64 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	So this song... This **in song. Every time I finished it, I'd accidentally paste something over it (3 in times, I'm stupid lol) and got to be real frustrating. But I needed to write this and it turned out better than I couldve hoped. The story is exagerated, but is based on real events. She is a lesbian, I think that's an important thing to mention. Check it, comment, you know the drill. HER FINAL WORDS. She epitomizes torment. Everyone looks down on her. Because her love is not conventional. Her sanity's demise: slow, but eventual. The woman is a fighter. But she holds too much inside her. One day she is bound to burst. She cannot control this curse. Why do we hate... That which we don't understand? Why does our fate... Lie in society's dirty hands? Her mouth remains shut, but in those eyes... In those beautiful eyes, I see all I need know. On this day, she leaves this world of lies. Before she goes, she will give her those *s a show. Begging. I'm begging her. Don't be stupid. Trying. To save her life. Bitch, don't be stupid. Sorry. Sorry I couldn't do more. Why do we hate... That which we don't understand? Why does our fate... Lie in society's dirty hands? She pulls the shotty from her purse. She takes the antogonists first. Then she sticks the barrel down her throat. In her hand lies her final words, a note... Why do we hate... That which we don't understand? Why does our fate... Lie in society's dirty hands? Last edited by Sljslj; 05-02-2010 at 09:14 PM.*

05-01-2010, 02:41 PM	#62 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	So a drummer, an amazing guitarist, and I are working on covers of Sabbath's Supernaut and Korn's Freak On A Leash. If it turns out well, I'll post it here.

05-02-2010, 12:41 PM	#63 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	sweet. I'd like to listen.

05-02-2010, 09:11 PM	#66 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	Any thoughts on my two newest lyrics? I know I ask for opinions alot, but sometimes I'm not sure if I'm a good writer.

05-03-2010, 08:25 AM	#67 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	TIME TO REWIND. Sick of everything I've become. Sick of feeling like I'm the only one. Every time I throw away that 20. I'm losing so much than money. Does self-inflicted trauma justify this cheap high? I've walked with kings and demons. I've touched the surface of a thousand suns... If only within my mind. It's time for me to rewind. The road forks up ahead. I've never seen anything like it. There's a hundred directions.* And ninety-nine are dead ends. Only one leads to ressurection. How did I get here... Without shedding a single tear? The end is always near, but I can prolong my time. As long I keep my head clear, purify my mind. It's time to rewind.

05-03-2010, 12:23 PM	#68 (permalink)
jodyWayne Groupie Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Texas Posts: 11	Wow. "Her Final Words" very powerfull. Would make a good video. You were right. I really like it. Keep it up, jodyW

05-04-2010, 06:22 AM	#69 (permalink)
Sljslj The Omniscient Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Reno, Nevada, USA Posts: 998	Thank you very much, Jody. I don't get alot of people leaving replys here and I certainly don't get alot of positive comments. Altho Conan stops by from time to time to criticize, it's mostly just me here. Anyway, I'm glad ou like it. Keep on keepin' on jody.

05-04-2010, 06:27 AM	#70 (permalink)
~~James~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Scotland Posts: 4,483	Just because your not getting replies doesn't mean people aren't reading, I like it.