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Old 06-25-2010, 08:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Post My first set of lyrics in a long long time please let me know what u think

BAND NAME ----- Bullets break bones

SONG TITLE ---- Blood stain




cry alone
ive gone today
no more lies
and no more pain
ive gone away
coz i know
that i cannot stay

everyday
i woke up
missing you
but now i know
theres nothing
i could do

everythings changed
and i will
watch this blood
stain
im ending this right now
i wanted u around
but this pain is to much
to take


everyday
i woke up
missing you
but now i know
theres nothing
i could do


everyday is the same
the thoughts and feelings
rushing round my brain
cutting in cutting out
why do i start to cry this blood again

its stabbing me cutting out my soul
why the pain why the tears
why my life im drowning in my fears
im drowning in my tears
misplaced guilt for all to hear
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Old 07-06-2010, 09:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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omg come on guys 157 views and not a single comment anyone care to even tell me its ****e lol
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Old 07-06-2010, 04:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think it's a bit morbid, but then again, so is almost every other song on here. I'm not a big fan of morbid/sad/depressing, so I'm gonna have to give this one a thumbs-down. Maybe you should try writing about something you love, rather than something you hate.
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Old 07-06-2010, 08:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanx for ur imput once im in a better frame of mind maybe i will give it a go but at the moment there aint nout positive in my life man lol
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