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Old 07-19-2010, 07:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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to all the home wreckers and tone inflectors.
all the terrible two's and the bruised booze blues.
i've got a message the intercom won't disclose.
the lowest point in the world is the view from a broken heart.
and the loudest noise is the clinking of ice in your half empty glass of gin and tonic.
i don't have to remind you that pigment after pigment, and mile after mile.
you'll still be in some form of self-induced denial.
someday, even the ghosts won't know which door to open.
and you will know how lonely feels.
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Old 07-19-2010, 07:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Not bad. Very country-ish feel to it.
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Old 07-21-2010, 01:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It seems like it has flow of a rap song, but its catchy. I like it
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