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Old 10-24-2010, 02:21 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Old 10-26-2010, 10:54 PM   #12 (permalink)
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What's wrong with mayo? I think it's pretty good, alot better than that crappy Miracle Whip.
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Old 10-26-2010, 11:26 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I see a deeper message in this song, I just don't know what it is.
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Old 10-31-2010, 08:54 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Old 11-02-2010, 04:09 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Come on guys, REALLY? God damn, I just want some real critiques.
Ha ha! There was a lot of humor in those lyrics, Jambon. They made me chuckle quite a bit, such as when you wrote, "I'm gonna shoot you! With a bullet of Mayo!" and went off on little tangents in the song.

Using different genres for the different sections like you've planned should make the song even funnier. It might be on the long side, though. You could probably remove some chunks without losing much of the punch of the song.

I'm with you on hating mayo, by the way...although I feel *vegan* mayo is tasty and nutritious, since it is made with canola oil and soy protein.
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Old 11-02-2010, 05:41 PM   #16 (permalink)
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I'm afraid to ask what regular mayo is made of.
Probably ground up cow fetuses and tangiable lack of hope.
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Old 11-02-2010, 05:58 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Mayo is tastey on everything! Except for pork rinds. Lesson learned.
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Old 11-11-2010, 06:30 PM   #18 (permalink)
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true!!! ENCORE ENCORE!!!!
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Old 11-14-2010, 07:37 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Haha, well at first I thought it was a funny bunch of lyrics you got there. Then I paused for a moment and took a listen to what was coming out of my headphones. If Pink Floyd can sing about gnomes and unicorns I suppose someone might as well sing about mayo . Other than that I thought is was really well constructed and full of humor, which I think can make a song quite excellent. Wouldn't be one of my favorite songs I suppose, but entertaining non the less, a bit like Frank Zappa.
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Old 11-28-2010, 05:55 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Bravo.
I agree with the Primus thing. You should get a bass guitar and get some trippy lines going on the lyrics.
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