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Old 11-15-2010, 06:53 PM   #11 (permalink)
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V/a/n d/y/k +e

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Old 11-15-2010, 06:56 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Terrible lyrics and no flow since you didn't record it, I can't even really imagine how that would flow to be honest with you. Just wack in general.
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Old 11-16-2010, 10:40 AM   #13 (permalink)
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like i said before... dyke doesnt rhyme
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Old 11-28-2010, 05:53 PM   #14 (permalink)
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I heard limp bizkit in there somewhere...
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