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Old 04-08-2011, 02:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Post I Came Here To Write

I came here to write
I went there to take some money
i didnt have out of an ATM
I went over there to meet some honey
I got her number at the pay n' STOP
YEA RIGHT
I do it like the cool guys did in my school
the ****heads who only had in there head was ****ing
****heads where their hmwrk was ****ing
while me and steve (ill name him steve)
had nothing to be,
no one to see
no one to spend all there time with
no one to make your mom have cold shoulder
to fight over
to cause problems, tears, agony,
no none of that **** we left that for the cool kids
and now im a cool kid,
jus gotta put up with ****
i gotta make time
i gotta tell them there pretty
when i really do is lie
i gotta watch everyone have fun
while im on the sidelines
im standing there with no shoes in glass
and somehow they run by
for once i gotta fell pain
if it ever comes
breaks through my chamber door
if this isnt hell than i dont want feel how high the flames go
if this isnt paused then where does the time really go
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Old 04-17-2011, 04:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i liked the second to last line,
the ending is a little confusing
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Old 06-16-2011, 08:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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good job. i loved reading it. keep up the good work.
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