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Old 04-11-2012, 06:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I don't mind what you've done here; I can really relate to the second one in particular. However as has been said the consistent "love" cliches are a little monotonous. Try and vary your themes a little more to avoid this. But nonetheless the're all pretty solid.
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