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Old 07-25-2012, 03:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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She stares at a blank slate
trying to decide her fate
which gate to go through
which one is best for her
which one is best for you.

She can’t decide
as tears drip down from her eyes
she has no idea why
just stands there and looks up at the sky.

It’s like a curse
it hurts so bad
it’s like a curse
it drives her mad.

It’s like a curse
the burn inside
it’s like a curse
the pain in her eyes.

She can’t tell which direction to go
it’s all the same
and she just doesn’t know.

It’s like a curse
it hurts so bad
it’s like a curse
it drives her mad.

It’s like a curse
the burn inside
it’s like a curse
the pain in her eyes.

It’s Like A Curse
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Old 07-25-2012, 03:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Life seems so empty and pointless sometimes
even when good things appear
there overcome by fear
when everything you hold dear
will eventually disappear.

One second it’s there
then poof gone forever
seems finding true happiness
never can be done
from demons you can’t run
even when you feel complete
you still feel the ache of defeat
and you don’t ever even know what to do
because everything just seems wrong to you.

So you keep flowing through life
feeling like nothing is right
you ****ed up your own life in so many ways you can’t explain
you wonder what keeps us from putting a bullet through our brain
are we all truly suicidal or is it just a part of lives game

What is there to gain from feeling heartaches pain
what is there to gain from standing out in the rain
what is the point of living at all
when every time we stand up
all we do Is fall.

What is the point of easing through pain
when you know It’s all your going to feel everyday
you should accept it you can’t defeat it anyway
even if we all control our own lives
other people involved in them
make an outcome to
so what’s the different in you?

Maybe that’s all life appears to be
a ball of fear wondering when death will come for me
intimacy jealousy
in the end means nothing to anyone you see.

What Is
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Old 07-25-2012, 03:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Trying to get you out of my mind
seems I’m thinking about you all the time
I know I can’t change what cannot be
but it seems this love is controlling me.

Was I the one who made it wrong
did we just simply not belong
did I sing the wrong tune of song
was I to slow and you moved on
were you ever really there or just always gone?

Trying to get you out of my head
lying inside this abandoned bed
living off all the pain I’ve been fed
trying to get rid of all the lies that have been said.

Was I the one who made it wrong
did we just simply not belong
did I sing the wrong tune of song
was I to slow and you moved on
were you ever really there or just always gone?

Was I the one who made it wrong
did we just simply not belong
did I sing the wrong tune of song
was I to slow and you moved on
were you ever really there or just always gone?

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Old 07-25-2012, 03:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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When your with me
everything’s like it should be
and I can feel everything is how I want to see
my heart was locked you girl were the key
and now I wanna share my mind and all my memory
with you and never wanna be apart
it’s true everything you do
makes me wanna open my heart
and none of this will ever disappear
I’ll always make sure you are near
forever and ever it’s you and I dear.

Life aint perfect
no one said it would be
but it will be close
as long as you’re with me.

Every second with you by my side
makes all the tears I cried not matter
because love is a ladder
and were at the top
let’s not fall
let’s just rock.

Love like a fine wine
getting better each passing day in time
I can’t believe your mine
and life don’t feel so bad
when I got your hand to grab.

Life aint perfect
no one said it would be
but it will be close
as long as you’re with me.

Life aint perfect
no one said it would be
but it will be close
as long as you’re with me.

As Long As You With Me
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Old 07-25-2012, 03:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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When you see people on the street
you see them have the goals you want to meet
when inside you feel those demons you will never beat
and you’ll never even have a chance on your own feet.

We never will feel fame
and love is our only claim
it’s a fact that we can’t change
we are a generation of pain

All we feel is lust
we have no trust
we’ve been broken too much
to even believe in a loving touch.

We never will feel fame
and love is our only claim
it’s a fact that we can’t change
we are a generation of pain

Generation Of Pain
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Old 07-25-2012, 09:32 PM   #6 (permalink)
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all of them are nice.... where r u from?
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Old 07-25-2012, 10:23 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I am from South Carolina in the United States.

Everything so different now
the visions in my head
and the worse part of loving you
was wishing you were dead.

You promised me a promise
you never kept true
I promised you a promise
that I broke to.

And I’d be a liar
to say my love was untrue
but I’d be a liar
if I said I would miss you.

And there’s a lonely shadow
lying on my wall
it’s been so long
since I’ve left this place
I think that’s all
that’s left at all.

And these pieces
they never seem to fit
but my life is darkness
nothing inside of it.

And every night I lie awake
inside my heart I fall
I cry to the shadow
that lie on my wall.

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Old 07-25-2012, 10:40 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi Alex! Great work, I like your lyrics. They're easy to sing as well for the most part which is great and the rhyming has a great 'snap' quality to them.

I would suggest copyrighting your work since you seem to like to post a lot of it. Even for feedback purposes

Good luck to ya!
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Old 07-25-2012, 10:42 PM   #9 (permalink)
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THANKS @1moretroubadour i have an email childincomplete94@gmail.com email me and i will show u the music i compose
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