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[Mondo Bungle]

I don't really know what string theory is if we're being honest. Is it like knitting

[Mondo Bungle]

i already wanna do another foley album, but like extra fast and heavy

[Frownland]

Totem I - i DEMO

Sounds like a guy swishing mouthwash during a lazer battle.

[timihaze]

I was in a hard rock band called Lunyne and we released an album called Outside In, and I previously released an album called Green Bird under the name Permanent Zero (both albums are on youtube.)

Now I have a music video up on youtube under my name Timi Haze for a song called Sleepsound. My style's kind of all over the place though.

[timihaze]

Originally Posted by MicShazam

Trying to come up with a new style to write in.

I put some effort into this one.

Honest and serious feedback would be much appreciated.


It's by no means done of course. I'm sort of feeling my way forward.

Did you mean to go off time at 0:21-0:30? Could be an interesting way to go but if you're trying to create a less stilted sound that's more naturally palatable I'd say to adjust the melodic rhythm.

I'm not sure in what sense it's off time? I didn't write it to fit 4/4 necessarily.
There's some uneven breaks and the piano notes are placed more by ear than by the grid.

Not saying I'm not going to change anything, but it was deliberately written in a way where I don't worry about locking everything down the way I usually do, which is also why there's no percussion.

[Frownland]

Originally Posted by MicShazam

Sounds like a guy swishing mouthwash during a lazer battle.

It will get more developed. Probably add some guy (or girl) eating and/or spitting as well.

Originally Posted by timihaze

I was in a hard rock band called Lunyne and we released an album called Outside In, and I previously released an album called Green Bird under the name Permanent Zero (both albums are on youtube.)

Now I have a music video up on youtube under my name Timi Haze for a song called Sleepsound. My style's kind of all over the place though.

You seem like a good poster not here just to promote your music, but check out our rules on newer members promoting their music just to make sure that you're not going overboard too quickly (you're good atm though).

[timihaze]

Originally Posted by Frownland

It will get more developed. Probably add some guy (or girl) eating and/or spitting as well.



You seem like a good poster not here just to promote your music, but check out on newer members promoting their music just to make sure that you're not going overboard too quickly (you're good atm though).

I'm just here to make some music buddies, but thanks for the heads up I'll be sure to keep the rules in mind!

[timihaze]

Originally Posted by MicShazam

I'm not sure in what sense it's off time? I didn't write it to fit 4/4 necessarily.
There's some uneven breaks and the piano notes are placed more by ear than by the grid.

Not saying I'm not going to change anything, but it was deliberately written in a way where I don't worry about locking everything down the way I usually do, which is also why there's no percussion.

So you're saying you want it to have a more fluctuating rhythmic feel? As in you want the tempo to modulate as you're playing? The tempo seemed to change at various points through the piece. I didn't measure it with a metronome however so I'm not 100% certain. Modulating tempo and rhythm can be interesting. It sounds like you're saying you want to play what you feel first and then organize it later. If that's what you mean I think that's a great idea for bringing out emotional themes as your piece will be governed more by your instincts while creating. Of course, editing can be used later for distributing emphasis within the piece.