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Old 12-01-2012, 10:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I have no idea about anything like composing a music or writing lyric/poetry. I just give it a try.
And i believe there's no specific rules when it comes to write something from your heart, something you know about. so,Just go with the flow.

Meet me downtown, its the darkest hallway.
Say goodbye to your friends
and set your hair for the last time.
We will be heading to the city of eagles.
Walking alone, trying to find a place, make it secure.

Stay strong
We gotta go
We gotta stay awake until we find our own nation.
We gotta drive until we find our own ocean.

I pay for every sunshine that fall upon me
I pay for every second that i spent smiling
scars seems lighter when no one is around
and i have started to see a sign of relief in the darkness,
where i don't have to pretend.

Stay strong
We gotta go
We gotta stay awake until we find our own nation.
We gotta drive until we find our own ocean.

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Old 12-01-2012, 10:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I wish I knew what melody to set this to..it's very powerful
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Old 09-05-2013, 08:36 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks
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Old 09-16-2013, 06:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Look up Dave Grohl's easy way to pop. He shows how to structure a song and create a good song easily, that's some deep **** you have going on, but a little re-structuring could be nice.
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Old 09-17-2013, 08:07 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I really love the song. I think that it reads beautifully.
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