joshuan12

Yo. I wrote these a while back, and wanted to hear some opinions on them. They aren't my best work by far, and there's a lot that I should change, but I want to hear some input before doing so.


It's the contraception, stuck in depression I spit to teach a lesson, but from a new perception I'm bringin' rude collections, no time for recollection cause I'm testin' the true shock, I just don't wanna hear em' talk, turnin portal to your heaven or hell, call me Jack or the beanstalk, I'm the path or just the one to walk, I'm shockin' prophets cause I spit the evil truth, whatever paradigm I stop time and recreate, I just don't think lines, I stop and let it contemplate, it's truth of fate as it shapes it all, born heros to slay gods we were born to fall, I shoot to Columbine and intercept the lesser step to peace bringing, I'm word stinging, head spinning, rock slinging more than the ****ing Palestinians, I'm the virtue bringin' back the fortuitous, torture the new again to burn the new testament, this ain't a test of god, they lied to you so they can control your minds, but only when your eyes open can you stop from seein' blind.

It's David Copperfield, I wield the poppy field to yield the seal to peal the feeling of the real, I made a deal with the devil to exceed the intelligence level of those who think they got their mind together, so now my face is leather and I spit raw just call me Sean Price, I'm a ****ing irritant cause my words itch like head lice, I was born to entice life, cut **** precise, I slice the dice with a vice grip, but my hand slip and it got cut, speak in tongues and my mind got hot, feels like I've been shot by the cops that hate us, it's our courage not out fear that seems to really truly make us, but it's their actions that rape us and take us down to the depths, we're not running away, we go towards them in small steps.

Shout when I spoke, remain to provoke but it's broken, I'm sick of the words I've spoken, it's shaken me so I'm chokin' on words, I know it seems absurd but I've heard this, I've learned bliss to learn it, it's called absurd **** so you disconcern it like it wasn't permanent, but I destroy the wish on your mind through the esscense of time, it's an esscense of rhyme to reminise on the line like it was the light of sublimeness, I call it timeless so time this, no regard to the mindless, divine listening to the cries of Columbine but never before to the deaths caused by war, so forever more it's told again as something like horrorcore, it's the end of a cord so

I'm endin' the lore, I'm sick of the down pour and noise, livin' with no choice I'm sick of the voice, cause we all gotta be hard at a level that our heart's like the devil's, it doesn't matter whether we're loved or not, when it comes to the end we all get shot, whether with aids or a lot by cops, it's the last stop so I'm choppin' end to start again, wherer you die or live just depends on the signals you send to the rulers of men, the choosers of death, it's the end of the rest as I'm blessed with the restlesness of it, consent to contraception it's relentless, I spit to teach a lesson but I'm stressin' out, I'm actin' out cause I doubt my own existance, I push it back but the thought is persistant, just sit and listen cause this death is a mission, it's the fusion of fission particles to startle a true mind, it's the enemies of man kind so stead fast cause it's come time, revolt and I'll live to no longer let die, no longer shall I shine with the hatred that's mine, it's love lust to the binding, don't stop quick for the whning, just remain silent and have your throat slit to the rhyming

PrinceFooL

how many bars is this???