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Old 08-25-2006, 11:43 AM   #11 (permalink)
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house party, kegs, half naked women on trampolines, and some guy with a mic recording us in a drunken stupor...
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Old 09-05-2006, 10:00 PM   #12 (permalink)
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this isnt planned to be released anytime soon, but its a live. listen to it dammit and tell me what you think
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Old 09-06-2006, 01:10 PM   #13 (permalink)
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ahh, I liked the solo in itt, s'good stuff Fenix.
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Old 09-06-2006, 01:17 PM   #14 (permalink)
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ahh, I liked the solo in itt, s'good stuff Fenix.
lol, thanx, its currently the only song where i get to throw a solo in.
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Old 09-06-2006, 11:56 PM   #15 (permalink)
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fun stuff....I just re-read it (as I see that I commented on it a while ago) and this line really stood out to me.
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but i recall/
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and everythings yesterdays news.../
no questions asked, no choice to choose
Great stuff..
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I'm so accustomed to hearing polished works that it's nostalgic and even somewhat of a throw back to hear a personal live recording - if I didn't have the lyrics on the site I would have no idea of what is going on and it would just sound like pure chaos.... but who said that was a bad thing?

I am looking forward to a polished version, though, but for now this will do quite nicely.
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Old 09-07-2006, 08:43 PM   #17 (permalink)
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fun stuff....I just re-read it (as I see that I commented on it a while ago) and this line really stood out to me.


Great stuff..
thanks PTS, couldnt really tell you what state of mind i was in when i wrote it, but looking back on some of the songs from around this time, it was a pretty f'd up place.

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I'm so accustomed to hearing polished works that it's nostalgic and even somewhat of a throw back to hear a personal live recording - if I didn't have the lyrics on the site I would have no idea of what is going on and it would just sound like pure chaos.... but who said that was a bad thing?

I am looking forward to a polished version, though, but for now this will do quite nicely.
cool, i used to record alot of shows with a small handheld tape recorder back in the day, every once in awhile i would catch a great raw sound that bands cant reproduce in a studio
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