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Fenixpunk 07-07-2005 10:29 AM

Another one of my bands songs that ive written. This one is sung somewhat slower than most of our songs but picks up on the chorus. the music is still heavy and kinda sludgy with a rockin solo thrown in that ranges from a few seconds to a few minutes depending on our moods.


Im not comfortable with change/
find myself slipping away/
in the confusion that ive made.../
with the illusions that ive played

I try to forget/
but i recall/
just when i think ive seen it all/
and everythings yesterdays news.../
no questions asked, no choice to choose

its hard to say what still remains/
lost connections/
broken chains/
portraits the water once reflects.../
The stones been tossed, that scene is wrecked

locked up, broke out, what else could i do?/
gotta get it through my head to stay away from you./
tied up, strapped down, preparing for the tease/
gotta get it through my head what it does to me./

little_dead_girl 07-15-2005 01:18 PM

they are really amazing lyrics wats ur band called? they sound kinda good jst reading the words from that song........xxxxxx........

Fenixpunk 07-15-2005 01:30 PM

my band is called The Declaimed, i should have alot of our songs somewhere online end of Sept/ early Oct.

right-track 09-26-2005 03:39 PM

Hehe...Im watching a documentary on Bob Dylan at the moment and I'v just sang the lyrics to 'Addiction' in a Dylanesque style (sorry Fenix) and it worked beatifully haha.

Good job with the lyrics by the way. :)

Fenixpunk 09-26-2005 03:59 PM


Dylanesque eh? ill have to keep that in the back of my mind next time i play it. :laughing:

right-track 09-26-2005 03:59 PM

Please don't ban me :D

Fenixpunk 09-26-2005 04:01 PM

if i could make my vocals twang like dylan, id do it.

tdoc210 09-26-2005 06:31 PM

dude i really like your song were am i gonna be able to purchase your record

Fenixpunk 09-27-2005 01:45 PM

ill let you know once everythings completed and in a nice little package.

PerFeCTioNThrUSileNCe 10-18-2005 12:10 AM

do you have anything up on the net yet?

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