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Old 07-07-2005, 11:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Another one of my bands songs that ive written. This one is sung somewhat slower than most of our songs but picks up on the chorus. the music is still heavy and kinda sludgy with a rockin solo thrown in that ranges from a few seconds to a few minutes depending on our moods.

Addiction

Im not comfortable with change/
find myself slipping away/
in the confusion that ive made.../
with the illusions that ive played

I try to forget/
but i recall/
just when i think ive seen it all/
and everythings yesterdays news.../
no questions asked, no choice to choose

its hard to say what still remains/
lost connections/
broken chains/
portraits the water once reflects.../
The stones been tossed, that scene is wrecked

Chorus:
locked up, broke out, what else could i do?/
gotta get it through my head to stay away from you./
tied up, strapped down, preparing for the tease/
gotta get it through my head what it does to me./
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Old 07-15-2005, 02:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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they are really amazing lyrics wats ur band called? they sound kinda good jst reading the words from that song........xxxxxx........
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Old 07-15-2005, 02:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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my band is called The Declaimed, i should have alot of our songs somewhere online end of Sept/ early Oct.
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Old 09-26-2005, 04:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hehe...Im watching a documentary on Bob Dylan at the moment and I'v just sang the lyrics to 'Addiction' in a Dylanesque style (sorry Fenix) and it worked beatifully haha.

Good job with the lyrics by the way.
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Old 09-26-2005, 04:59 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks,

Dylanesque eh? ill have to keep that in the back of my mind next time i play it.
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Old 09-26-2005, 04:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Please don't ban me
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Old 09-26-2005, 05:01 PM   #7 (permalink)
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if i could make my vocals twang like dylan, id do it.
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Old 09-26-2005, 07:31 PM   #8 (permalink)
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dude i really like your song were am i gonna be able to purchase your record
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Old 09-27-2005, 02:45 PM   #9 (permalink)
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ill let you know once everythings completed and in a nice little package.
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Old 10-18-2005, 01:10 AM   #10 (permalink)
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do you have anything up on the net yet?
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Why do I start what I can't finish?
Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers.
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But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore..
maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers....

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