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Old 12-13-2014, 04:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Short song...

You could have been anything
You would've been my everything
But instead
You let yourself get caught up in others' failures
Their successes
My soul goes out to you
My prayers, my love
You poor, poor soul, you're lost
Aren't you?
Didn't you see my eyes then?
Couldn't you feel?
You could have been so wonderful
In your opinion, what is
The point
Of anything?
You could have been everything
My poor love.

Opinions please? It was originally inspired by Syd March from Antiviral, but I doubt anyone here has seen that movie. If anyone has I'll be happy.
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