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Old 12-25-2015, 09:25 AM   #1 (permalink)
 
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Gonna post some lyrics. Feedback'd be sweet.

First One:

Spin incentives from that wheel
Innocence is ignorance wrapped up in tears
Weave a world so fragile, from your fingertips
Pile up the broken, and the damned, and sick

A message, lit up in the dark
The candle flickers and spirits merge as I depart

How long must I lay?
How long must I look down?

Confessions bare and plain to see
Misery will haunt your steps as you walk
Give me something I can safely put my trust upon
Foundations strong but nothing will grow upon


A message, lit up in the dark
The candle flickers and spirits merge as I depart

Is this it?
Is this as good as it gets?
Listen
Something's happening here

Another One:


Find myself in trouble once again
This world ain't gonna fix itself
Bleeding world, crippled and tired
Let me be blessed with the compassion I need

When all else has gone
The emptiness remains
Shamed as the lesser
Of Fortune's children

I will come unstuck
In the light of this full moon
Opportunity is rife
But it closes up so soon

I will come unstuck
In the light of this full moon
Opportunity is rife
But it closes up so soon

A Third:
Here I lay my love
Rapture couldn't come soon enough
Everything returns to dust
The days darken, the water rusts

Glow, still, glow on
Guide the sun with your soft hand
A stranger in a promised land

Glow, still, go on
Untangle this sorry tale
Return the hope where other's fail

And here I lay my love
The spring of youth has run dry
Impart wisdom in the storm's eye
A time to leave, a time to die

Glow, still, glow on
Glow, still, go on
And from the dirt I leave behind
Grass will grow, and so too will life
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The overuse of babe/baby, the lack of any sort of discernible originality, the melodrama and the general sense of an especially heinous sort of hardcore vapid stupidity all make me want to jab my eyes out with a drill-press and then hang myself from the CN Tower with an electrified rope that sends shocks in excess of 10,000 volts through my body as I slowly die. While listening to Dream Theater.

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Old 12-25-2015, 12:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very plain
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Hmm, what's this in my pocket?

*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*

DAMN IT MONDO
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Old 12-25-2015, 02:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
 
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Very plain
Very plain... basket ball?
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I like it
Cheers, added some more lyrics.
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A little sad. Your story and heart voice?
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Have some more.
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