rate 4 lines... more to it, however, can't give it all away
 

Maybe your mind will change,
or I'll watch you bleed

And maybe your eyes will sink,
Before you breathe,

Maybe your mind will fail,
before you care,

And maybe you're just hard to take...

I see seven lines.

Are "bleed" and "breath" supposed to rhyme? Because they don't.

Assonance

No they're not.

Agreed, you can really detect it when singing.

Sorry 4 verse.

All right. So what is "before you breath" supposed to mean?

I assume it's "before you breathe".

He said "bleed" and "breath" were not supposed to rhyme, though.

OK, so it's pretty messed up if you take it like it sounds...

The line is: "Maybe your eyes will sink, before you breathe"... Think about normal eye and mouth placement on the human face.

You're right, sorry, just typed it up quickly..

Sorry for the confusion, you were right...

there.