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12-02-2016, 11:25 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2016
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I made lyrics called 'The Sun'. please give me some comment.
I was waiting for the sun when i was hazing at dawn
To see the sun rising up for resplendenting my eyes And i realised that it is not a real sun Cause it feels so hot and tastes like metallic This metallic sun is fron eight thousand meter high This metallic sun is from eight thousand meter high I was sitting on the ruins I could see the bodies and ghosts They said "please give me some water" But i couldn't get a water for them Now i'm flying in the hottest cloud And changing into dust This metallic sun is from eight thousand meter high. Actually i made 4 songs and this is the first song what i made. When you like this, then i'll post another lyrics. thank you. |
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