Is my song any good? (quote)

<<<>>> · 08-23-2005, 06:01 PM

here it goes:
intro
verse
chorus
bridge
verse
verse
chorus
chorus
outro

TheBig3 · 08-25-2005, 07:27 AM

Alright well run it by me. The bridge is what again. I use my own terms and I got tripped up with Bridge and Coda when I was learning my musical jargon, Never really got a definite idea of it. But if its what I think it is, then it should come later in the song. Maybe like:
intro
verse
chorus
verse
verse
bridge
verse
chorus
chorus
outro

and I would scrap an outro. That sounds too Limp Bizkit for me.

<<<>>> · 08-25-2005, 10:42 AM

too limp bizkit? F*** Fred Durst! But anyway. Why would you purposely follow the traditional song structure? I never got that. Be creative.

<<<>>> · 08-25-2005, 10:43 AM

nothing wrong with outros unless you do it Durst style

<<<>>> · 08-25-2005, 10:43 AM

the post was originally a stupid joke

TheBig3 · 08-25-2005, 09:03 PM

Yeah but it wasn't funny so I tried to salvage it.

EDGE · 08-26-2005, 12:50 AM

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<<<>>> · 08-26-2005, 10:58 AM

Quote:

Yeah but it wasn't funny

thats why i said stupid joke, see exhibit A

Quote:

Exhibit A:the post was originally a stupid joke

tdoc210 · 08-26-2005, 02:53 PM

poor children bickering

EDGE · 08-26-2005, 02:54 PM

Oh..

'hahahah'.

08-23-2005, 06:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
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08-25-2005, 07:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Alright well run it by me. The bridge is what again. I use my own terms and I got tripped up with Bridge and Coda when I was learning my musical jargon, Never really got a definite idea of it. But if its what I think it is, then it should come later in the song. Maybe like: intro verse chorus verse verse bridge verse chorus chorus outro and I would scrap an outro. That sounds too Limp Bizkit for me. __________________ I've moved to a new address

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<<<>>> Dependent User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: between yo' legs Posts: 397	too limp bizkit? F*** Fred Durst! But anyway. Why would you purposely follow the traditional song structure? I never got that. Be creative. __________________ -)-)-)-)-)-)

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<<<>>> Dependent User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: between yo' legs Posts: 397	nothing wrong with outros unless you do it Durst style __________________ -)-)-)-)-)-)

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<<<>>> Dependent User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: between yo' legs Posts: 397	the post was originally a stupid joke __________________ -)-)-)-)-)-)

08-25-2005, 09:03 PM	#6 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	Yeah but it wasn't funny so I tried to salvage it. __________________ I've moved to a new address

08-26-2005, 12:50 AM	#7 (permalink)
EDGE accidental genius Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Boston, MA Posts: 1,161	.......................................

08-26-2005, 02:53 PM	#9 (permalink)
tdoc210 ashes against the grain Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: new hampsha Posts: 2,617	poor children bickering __________________ We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.

08-26-2005, 02:54 PM	#10 (permalink)
EDGE accidental genius Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Boston, MA Posts: 1,161	Oh.. 'hahahah'.