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Old 08-26-2005, 03:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default some songs i wrote that you probably wont like but...

LEFT
: why why why
been left by myself
execpt for one
daddys gone away
insanity
: screammm the pain
whyy why
: was it me
: who
dont call me a prat
im no a ****ing brat
stay away leave me alone all in my room
save me
save me



R.I.P YOU


i wanna rip them all to shreds
like a ****in rag doll
they are all bitches whining and tearing
im gonna wreck my life
i hate them rench them through
they por acid in my wounds
: take me away
sanity
i hid undere my shed
: wishing they were dead
just running from my feelings
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 08-26-2005, 04:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 08-26-2005, 04:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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lost

look see theve gone away

go live by the rive
watch the fish
they are dying
as you watch the days
you realize you have to die
everything dies
school came and went
met some friends of your own
they are not cleancut
yourlifes in the garbage
stare at the ground your lost
lost
lost
lost
forever gone
keep you away
keep him away
go away
ahhhhhhhh
die die die
rest rest
in my wooden box
im as happy as anyone could be

SCREAM

ahhhhrgrgrg
i hate you
get the **** away
leave me alone
go to my room
liten to you scream
but you arnt a person
your my past i just want to ****in
SCREEEEEEEAMM
scream
i wanna die and be alone
kill me please
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 08-27-2005, 11:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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that is straight up e to the mo.
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Old 08-27-2005, 02:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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that is straight up e to the mo.
definitly not try post hardcore or screamo
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 08-27-2005, 05:22 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Death, words are not songs, and if you want peoples opinions, don't be so combative with them.
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Old 08-27-2005, 05:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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ok but its definatley not meant to be emo
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Old 08-27-2005, 05:45 PM   #8 (permalink)
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dual accounts?
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Old 08-27-2005, 06:16 PM   #9 (permalink)
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^ no thats my friend he typed for me i was accidentley logged on to his at his house when i was viewing this sorry ill have my friend delete that
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 08-28-2005, 04:25 PM   #10 (permalink)
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...Hate to say it....but this is just shit. There are times when writing in sheer teen angst is just is crap.This is one of those times.

EDIT: and "daddys gone away" wtf? you tryin to sound like good charlotte?
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