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Old 04-08-2008, 05:35 AM   #11 (permalink)
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it was recorded live in a shed. im sorry i offended yall.
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Old 04-08-2008, 07:48 AM   #12 (permalink)
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offended? it was pretty good comparered to some of the **** that goes through here, you could use some improvement. and it would probably better if you had a better recording studio

i must say it was a good attempt
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Condition grounded but determined to try
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Old 04-08-2008, 08:15 AM   #13 (permalink)
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I would just want someone to remake the song. im not playing anylonger with the band. I just thought someone from over here might know or have connections to maybe get this to hinder or some band to here. I just like the song, mainly the chorus.

the new part is.. it was new to you and everybody else. like i said i didn't mean to offend anyone or mislead you. When i went through a rough part of my life i turned to my gutair and write this. it help me out. I was just seeing if someone liked it enoughto remake it and record it to record stands and put it on the radio. it might help others out and who knows, it could be a hit. almost everyone i know feels this way about their ex.
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Old 04-08-2008, 11:43 AM   #14 (permalink)
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i suppose if you added some piano you could call it a simple plan song.
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Old 04-08-2008, 08:14 PM   #15 (permalink)
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I find it very generic and the vocals need work but everything else is okay.
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Old 04-13-2008, 10:07 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Old 05-05-2008, 04:52 PM   #17 (permalink)
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The song is good, the performance isn't.
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Old 05-07-2008, 09:06 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by shawn pierce View Post
I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "
...isn't she supposed to be doing that, she's your X-wife, key part being X.
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