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Old 02-14-2009, 10:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just finished it about 20 minutes ago. Unfortunately I still must use electronic drums and do not have a bass, so that is all that's left out. So if you can take 5 minutes out just listen to it and tell me what can be improved (im sure most can).

It is called Stuck In the Woods Without Shoes *Thanks
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Old 02-14-2009, 11:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I have to say I liked that a lot. Great rhythm, nice guitars (the rhythmic one and the wailing awesome solo one), and just easy to listen to. I think it's fine the way it is. I'll be keeping this good sir.
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Old 02-14-2009, 11:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I have to say I liked that a lot. Great rhythm, nice guitars (the rhythmic one and the wailing awesome solo one), and just easy to listen to. I think it's fine the way it is. I'll be keeping this good sir.
Thanks for taking the time I am constantly amazed the sound quality a little 100$ M-Audio Interface can give me on my ****ty computer
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Old 02-14-2009, 11:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Yeah it's great quality. So you recorded it and then edited the sound?
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Sounds really good RezZ! One thing I might suggest is trying a cleaner but wetter lead guitar sound, I think that might work better in a minimalistic song like this one. Just a thought.
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Yeah it's great quality. So you recorded it and then edited the sound?
No, just recorded straight into Sonar, then messed with panning and timing.
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Old 02-15-2009, 12:05 AM   #7 (permalink)
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So...

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Sounds really good RezZ! One thing I might suggest is trying a cleaner but wetter lead guitar sound, I think that might work better in a minimalistic song like this one. Just a thought.
Thanks zoon. And yea, I agree. I just got a new preamp so have been getting a little carried away with the effects lately Its hard not to, considering theres about 100 different sounds on it.

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wait wut.
Maybe I misunderstood your question. You asked if I recorded it then edited sound. Yes, recorded using audio interface then edited in Sonar.
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Ok that works, and it's still a cool track.
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Just got a bass yesterday, and have been fooling with it all day. These wont be to great but I made up 2 bass lines and was just going to post them here if anyone feels in the mood to giving some feedback.

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Also a question to anyone willing to answer. I have been playing with a pick and also without. I seem to like the tone and feel of having the pick but will it hinder when I progress down the road?
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