What a good intorduction consists of. (hardcore, genre, deathcore, member)

Sneer · 05-01-2009, 07:50 AM

Sort your writing out and maybe they will. Seriously dude, you cant go giving people advice with spelling mistakes like 'faveorite', they just wont take you seriously. Apart from the grammar issues it's a decent thread. I realise this is the second time i've called you out, im not picking on you, it's simply the case that i've stumbled across two of your threads and both have been ropey. Think of it as constructive criticism

05-01-2009, 07:50 AM	#3 (permalink)
Sneer Let it drip Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 5,397	Sort your writing out and maybe they will. Seriously dude, you cant go giving people advice with spelling mistakes like 'faveorite', they just wont take you seriously. Apart from the grammar issues it's a decent thread. I realise this is the second time i've called you out, im not picking on you, it's simply the case that i've stumbled across two of your threads and both have been ropey. Think of it as constructive criticism __________________ LastFM Sneer's Emporium of Sound Fright Team radio show