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Old 12-26-2011, 07:11 PM   #11 (permalink)
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0/5. No haiku in sight.

Two, And We'd Be Bananas


If our D.N.A.
Was off by just one percent
We would be dolphins.
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Old 12-26-2011, 08:27 PM   #12 (permalink)
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5/5

Maybe you would be
A dolphin; swimming, swimming...
but one raped Hank Hill.
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Old 12-26-2011, 08:39 PM   #13 (permalink)
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3.5/5

A new season of
Arrested Development
Hook stuck in stair car
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Old 12-26-2011, 08:51 PM   #14 (permalink)
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3/5 I feel it lacks emotional depth Fasho.

Once, so beautiful
Branches dancing with the wind
Now passing and grey
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Old 12-27-2011, 06:21 AM   #15 (permalink)
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^ 9/10.
I like the way your image focuses on a natural image, like a Japanese water-colour. Only beaten by the best so far, from Pedestrian.
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Autumn leaves; cornflakes
Left out in a bowl of rain
Too wet for breakfast
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Old 12-27-2011, 11:30 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Oddly unsettling 8/10

Grass pokes through the edge
Of the newly melted snow
A calm winter day
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Old 12-27-2011, 11:39 AM   #17 (permalink)
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1/5. Not a haiku.

Why Is It Milk

A coconut is
A lot more like a fruit than
it is like a cow.
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Old 12-27-2011, 11:43 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Well **** close enough
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Old 12-27-2011, 11:45 AM   #19 (permalink)
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10/10 I like cows.


Where did my boobs go?
They were here a month ago...
Oh, I could just cry.
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Old 12-27-2011, 11:54 AM   #20 (permalink)
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5/10 no ryming brah

Boobs are weird looking
Small lumps of fat typically
On female bodies
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