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Old 12-27-2011, 12:20 PM   #31 (permalink)
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7/12

This thread was so smart
Of Docsoft to come up with
Doc for president
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:22 PM   #32 (permalink)
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This thread was so smart
Of Docsoft to come up with
Doc for president
It's not difficult
all you need to do is count
why are you failing?
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:24 PM   #33 (permalink)
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Where did I mess up?
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:25 PM   #34 (permalink)
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wait no, read it wrong
I thought it was doctor soft
seven out of ten

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Old 12-27-2011, 12:26 PM   #35 (permalink)
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Still not a haiku mate.

Rookie Mistake

GOD, WHAT HAVE I DONE?!
Extracted the egg-beater
Whilst on high power.
8/10

Listen to Conan
Listen MusicBanter friends
Don't forget to rate.
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:31 PM   #36 (permalink)
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3/16 stone cold

Oh I want to be
Inside. This ain't no haiku.
I want nothing.
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:36 PM   #37 (permalink)
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0/10

Five, seven then five
A haiku is born this way
Just follow the rules
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Old 12-27-2011, 12:42 PM   #38 (permalink)
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8/10 very informative

A haiku master
Maybe future president
Go, DoctorSoft, go!
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Old 12-29-2011, 12:08 AM   #39 (permalink)
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6/10

A dying day done
mindlessly numb loser bum
the chum in a whale
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Old 12-29-2011, 07:58 AM   #40 (permalink)
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Very rhythmic ! The first two lines are great, but I didn`t really understand the last one; is chum a type of fish or am I thinking of chub ?

Here`s one in that little-known genre, the cheesy promo haiku :

the FAIR album club
dusty box of strange music
needs noms to survive

Not entirely a joke, so why not make a contribution:-
http://www.musicbanter.com/country-f...lbum-club.html
Last edited by Lisnaholic; 12-30-2011 at 10:13 PM. Reason: updating link
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