Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-19-2009, 12:30 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-19-2009, 12:27 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-19-2009, 09:30 AM
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paradoxy's Songwriting Journal
Song of the Faerie
There was a fearie maidin come,
From the mountain high~
She stooped don be a gleaming mere
As the sun swooped down to die.
As the moon spilled silver down upon
This...
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Forum: Thread Graveyard
03-19-2009, 09:25 AM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 08:04 PM
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Replies: 9
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Thank you Veridical Fiction..it was originally...
Thank you Veridical Fiction..it was originally written to be a song...good call there.
God, hungry hippos? (cry)...I used the word crossfire, because sometimes I feel like trying to communicate,...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 07:49 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 07:42 PM
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Replies: 58
Views: 5,214
Wow ! that is a very interesting...
Wow ! that is a very interesting interpretation....i really like the concept of havint it "continue on and on like stairs might" I think that Veridical Fiction's re-write scans better, and would...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 07:37 PM
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Replies: 58
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Forum: Thread Graveyard
03-18-2009, 12:04 PM
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Replies: 150
Views: 17,440
Nice concept, but how about this...?
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Nice concept, but how about this...?
Everyone has a phobia.
Everyone is scared.
And many of these little frights
Make us happiness impaired.
For some it can be spiders,
Or heights,or even...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 11:48 AM
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Replies: 147
Views: 13,900
I think it is fairly obvious, but that may just...
I think it is fairly obvious, but that may just be me. I am cheered that you see how inaction and fear of chance can paralyze.....kudos to you for facing your fears and embracing change, no matter...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 11:18 AM
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Replies: 58
Views: 5,214
Wow, the original post used some great language...
Wow, the original post used some great language and imagery, but didn't really scan all that well.There was a lot of ambiguity in what was being conveyed...not that that is a bad thing, because it...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 11:10 AM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 10:44 AM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-18-2009, 10:32 AM
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Forum: Introductions
03-18-2009, 09:49 AM
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Replies: 2
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Greetings from the Ancient Gods
Ancient Gods is a band that grew out of a chance meeting. Jeremy and Chris Hird, our vocalists and composers, are brothers. Jeremy plays electric and acoustic guitar,as well as whatever else strikes...
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