Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-08-2012, 04:31 PM
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-08-2012, 12:36 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,214
Higher Grounds
VERSE1:
complicated mysteries
telling different histories
playing many melodies
for an audience who's not complete
darkness falling I can't sleep
time is flying awaken dreams
moving slow...
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Forum: General Music
12-29-2011, 06:47 PM
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Replies: 1,156
Views: 119,541
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
08-16-2011, 07:31 PM
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Replies: 275
Views: 53,858
Dragons den
red fiery hell within
fictional...
Dragons den
red fiery hell within
fictional district
bible describing non fictional blood pits
twisted with a sin inside the loving bit
it's a tweak a paradox
black and white against ethical...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
07-19-2011, 04:44 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
hey guys! I got a video up of me singing and...
hey guys! I got a video up of me singing and playing my original song "Undefined", and I would love some feedback on both lyrics and music, thanks! : D
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‪Undefined by...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-25-2011, 06:32 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-24-2011, 06:40 PM
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Replies: 89
Views: 16,252
I loved grey angels. Pretty much how you...
I loved grey angels. Pretty much how you described everything. Got nothing I want to change or replace. The kind of litteratur I enjoy, and it's all so gentle. Well done mate.
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-22-2011, 05:11 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,531
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-22-2011, 10:35 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 1,531
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-21-2011, 06:28 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-16-2011, 07:25 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,095
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-16-2011, 12:55 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-12-2011, 06:11 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
verse 1
every captain needs a sinking ship ...
verse 1
every captain needs a sinking ship
every living flame dies when oxygen forfeits
every child was made by two peoples love
melting two parts into one whole
it's summer and warm you...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-08-2011, 03:11 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
The Moon / Bella Luna
the moon is a picture ...
The Moon / Bella Luna
the moon is a picture
up on the blue painted wall
hanging like a courtin
above us all
oh shining brighter than the sun and stars combined
lightning up the sky the...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
06-07-2011, 03:02 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-28-2011, 01:39 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
Finished the song, and this is imo one of the...
Finished the song, and this is imo one of the coolest one I've composed. It all went so smooth and I love the take on the song. Would love to hear what you guys think about it! :))
OUTER SPACE
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-27-2011, 03:53 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 3,483
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-27-2011, 08:11 AM
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Replies: 270
Views: 37,847
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-25-2011, 04:01 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
I wanna take you to a place
in outer space ...
I wanna take you to a place
in outer space
I'll promise to spade a bead that I can never lay
I'll cut to the chase after several minutes thumbling with the trace
somewhere out in space
reasons...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-24-2011, 01:17 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
UNDEFINED
feels like i'm wasting my time ...
UNDEFINED
feels like i'm wasting my time
just wanna hold your hand in mine
your love is stained something irrelevant inside
lost the moments your eyes they dried behind
I gave you water and...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-21-2011, 07:39 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 3,079
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-20-2011, 04:33 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-20-2011, 07:57 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 3,079
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-20-2011, 07:54 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 4,179
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
05-20-2011, 04:27 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 3,079
the thing about similies is that you can make...
the thing about similies is that you can make beautiful lines which can suit better with how the text flows. methaphors is nearly always better, but there are always expecations which will suit the...
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