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Old 03-14-2007, 03:01 PM   #471 (permalink)
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michael jordan has wings??? dude, just stop trying
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Old 03-14-2007, 04:05 PM   #472 (permalink)
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You f*ckin' bitches need to shut the f*ck up/
You make a real dude wanna f*ck ya asses up/
On some real sh*t I feel like I really don't appreciate/
You f@ggots talkin' sh*t, so the violence I'll initiate/
Kruger? Who that? The dude named Freddy?/
Freddy got fingered, and I don't think you're ready/
To face me, lets face it/
You're two-faced and you fake it/
You face me and I'll break it/
And I don't think you'll make it/
You verbally stumble, ain't got a leg to rest upon/
You couldn't serve a cat if you worked at a Chinese restaurant/
You phony cats are bitches/
Pull your pants down to reveal/
You snitches drop dimes, I drop hundred dollar bills/
I go straight for the jugular when I pummel dudes/
You f@ggots go straight for the junk when you fondel dudes/
It's embarrassing the herecy being emitted from your larynx/
If I was born 20 years earlier I'd talk some sense into your parents/
Cuz apparently the parenting present in ya house is disappearing/
Spare the rod, spoil the child/
Spill ya blood, bring a smile/
Your style is whacker than TUTG's left hand/
At the end of the battle I'm the only one left standin'/
You wouldn't understand the stand that I take when I take the stand/
Respect your man/
I could punch Diddy in the mouth and I'd still make the band/
You rap more like Dr. Phil than Dr. Dre/
Bust ya face, off the chain/
You catch a case, you droppin' names/
Stool-pigeon KRUGER/
Deepthroat a Luger/
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Old 03-14-2007, 04:50 PM   #473 (permalink)
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Good overall, but you can't rhyme dudes with dudes, it's not right.
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Old 03-14-2007, 05:42 PM   #474 (permalink)
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Good overall, but you can't rhyme dudes with dudes, it's not right.
I got ya, it was off the top :\ I'm kinda proud of the "understand the stand I take" line.
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Old 03-14-2007, 05:49 PM   #475 (permalink)
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Finally, the last few pages (or more) have been all shit raps with the exception of a few.

Yeah I just complimented oojay <.<
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Old 03-14-2007, 05:50 PM   #476 (permalink)
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I liked the Diddy line
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Old 03-14-2007, 05:58 PM   #477 (permalink)
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Your style is whacker than TUTG's left hand < Lol.
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Old 03-14-2007, 08:33 PM   #478 (permalink)
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You f*ckin' bitches need to shut the f*ck up/
You make a real dude wanna f*ck ya asses up/
On some real sh*t I feel like I really don't appreciate/
You f@ggots talkin' sh*t, so the violence I'll initiate/
Kruger? Who that? The dude named Freddy?/
Freddy got fingered, and I don't think you're ready/
To face me, lets face it/
You're two-faced and you fake it/
You face me and I'll break it/
And I don't think you'll make it/
You verbally stumble, ain't got a leg to rest upon/
You couldn't serve a cat if you worked at a Chinese restaurant/
You phony cats are bitches/
Pull your pants down to reveal/
You snitches drop dimes, I drop hundred dollar bills/
I go straight for the jugular when I pummel dudes/
You f@ggots go straight for the junk when you fondel dudes/
It's embarrassing the herecy being emitted from your larynx/
If I was born 20 years earlier I'd talk some sense into your parents/
Cuz apparently the parenting present in ya house is disappearing/
Spare the rod, spoil the child/
Spill ya blood, bring a smile/
Your style is whacker than TUTG's left hand/
At the end of the battle I'm the only one left standin'/
You wouldn't understand the stand that I take when I take the stand/
Respect your man/
I could punch Diddy in the mouth and I'd still make the band/
You rap more like Dr. Phil than Dr. Dre/
Bust ya face, off the chain/
You catch a case, you droppin' names/
Stool-pigeon KRUGER/
Deepthroat a Luger/

so freddy got fingered, but that's not me
get your sh!t staight, that's tom green
i'm the crazy fu<k that'll rip out your spleen
is this your first time rhyming cuz your not that keen
so get your d!ck outta boys life magazine
this dude, ooay, didn't want to attack me, or did he
go ahead, join the band, cuz who the fu<k is p. diddy
i didn't want to come back to this thread, but i did outta pity
you came out your mouth with bullsh!t but the sh!t never hit me
so the sh!t that your doing, i suggest you do it differently
insanity is doing the same thing hoping for a new result
so when you feel stupid, it's not my faught
and your little "rant" i take with a grain of salt
you tried to catch me down, but you got caught
with your d!ck in your hand, that's what i thought
and thinking up rhymes is something, for me, that comes easy
oojay, you cheesy, please b, im come through in a squeeze, see
and you and the tool guy, ha two tools trying to tease me
back in school, with that fool, is where you need be
i don't claim to be bigger that dre but im better than you
so what i expect is you show respect where respect is due
i accept you believe in your sh!t that you're putting me through
even that line where you rhyme dude with dude
and you know o.j., your time has reached its expiration
so when you feel that uncomfortable sensation
you'll be stealing rhymes from my dictation
making you realize your a pawn of my creation

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Old 03-14-2007, 10:14 PM   #479 (permalink)
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Stop posting one after every rap, it's completely irrelevant, they're obviously not your first posts in this thread.
Goddamn.
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Old 03-15-2007, 06:01 AM   #480 (permalink)
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Stop posting one after every rap, it's completely irrelevant, they're obviously not your first posts in this thread.
Goddamn.
saying one at the end is like a way of saying, i'm out, or good-bye. learn your ebonics, damn!!
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