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madeinNY 01-03-2006 12:45 PM

breaking lines to enter your heart....didn't get that part....

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 12:51 PM

such as
you know how you can cross a line between friends and lovers.. well thats it.. :o)

madeinNY 01-03-2006 12:52 PM

aha...well then, there is nothing i would change :)

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 12:58 PM

:o) woooooooooooooooooooooooo! makes me smile

madeinNY 01-03-2006 01:00 PM

:)

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 01:02 PM

Comfort in Empties Arm’s



Falling to my feet…… again
Drown you in my empty soul
Taken mindless pleasure in… this

Games you’ve played
Lies you’ve said

I’m a moron because of ……. You
Thought I should try to trust in….. You

Carry out my other victims
Break my body…. Down
Kill the eyes that steal…. Your soul

**** you... I’ve got my life to lose

I am just an insane creation of……. Everything that’s ill
Trust into the saneness of your lies
Carry you into the sweetest dreams

Break you down….
Here’s the…….
MISERY!

Bringing you down…. So far down
Bring you down… so far down
Bringing you down… so far down
Bring you so far down…



i'm not sure if i put that song there yet or not.. just cope with me here tho..
in this song if i coudl ver in fact put music behind it some day this is what it would be like ...

where theres a line.. and then alot dots like this are there ............ in between whatever and another word its a stop then the word puts in then dragging it into the line under it.. get it.. haha hmmm! i';m confuseing anyways.. and thats what the song would be like.. and there is no real course in the song still the end..

Break you down….
Here’s the…….
MISERY!

Bringing you down…. So far down
Bring you down… so far down
Bringing you down… so far down
Bring you so far down…

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that part i guess would be course like.. but in between the two couruse parts i would have just instruments and it would rock!!!

madeinNY 01-03-2006 01:05 PM

It sounds like a revenge song, which is kind of cliche....but there's originality in the way you would things...it's a little confusing, but if you decipher a little it's quite good.

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 01:08 PM

yea i wrote that song last night i think.. or the night before either way.. i like it.... i just wish i coudl make it real some how haha!

madeinNY 01-03-2006 01:08 PM

Well wait, you play guitar, right?

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 01:12 PM

no i used to.. but i don't have one any more!! :o(


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