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madeinNY 01-03-2006 01:13 PM

aw...well maybe you can buy one...

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 01:15 PM

yea thats a good idea.. want to send me the money for that ahhaha.. me being poor doesn't help my non musical carrer take off haha

madeinNY 01-03-2006 01:16 PM

ohhhh lol..well do you know anyone who has a guitar??

Sabgoat 01-03-2006 01:17 PM

i do.. but most of my friends can't play guitar so they fake they do and would never let me touch theres in fear that i would be better then them..

at least i know i can't play it.. but i try and i would rather make my own stuff other then just learning every other song by nirvana!! haha

Sabgoat 01-06-2006 04:36 PM

new song.. well to put in here that is.. but i wrote this along time ago too! so please rip it apart and enjoy!! haha

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Eviction of the Affection


The secrets of you and me lies beneath my feet
Deep within the ground
Spinning round and round

My kisses are cold
My arms they won’t hold…
LET GO!

I can’t do this
Don’t let …
Go…

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I will blame you

Oddly knowing there is no control
Whisper to you through the ground
Spinning round and round

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I will blame you
Cause I ****ing hate you...

Circle the hate around my soul
I will let you diminish away
Ha-ha! … Insane in the things I think
Imagination takes control
Ha-ha! … You think you made me whole

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I blame it on you
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of affection I had
I still blame you
Cause I ****ing hate you…
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now begin to rip!

madeinNY 01-06-2006 08:04 PM

this is the best thing in this thread :)

but this: My heart stains you

and this: Whisper to you through the ground

don't make sense to me...and how are you going to fit the Ha ha's in?

Sabgoat 01-06-2006 08:20 PM

the hahas are a stop in the song.. where the music every thing stops then the drms slowly creep in and then laughs in the back round but only from one person.. and its just a simple haha.. and then kind creeps back into singing.. haha

i have a strange tool inspried song writing and singing style haha

madeinNY 01-06-2006 08:22 PM

haha sounds cool G'luck ;)

Sabgoat 01-06-2006 08:42 PM

yea i'll need it haha.. tool inspried me write.. yet when i write some of stuff like the last few songs i'm sent you.. i can picture them beign like tool songs.. yet i can also picture them beign acoustic only songs haha.. know what i';m saying?

madeinNY 01-06-2006 08:43 PM

yea, i get it ;)

what is tool??


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