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Old 01-22-2006, 07:02 PM   #11 (permalink)
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no no, they're just joke poem things...get it?

but enough about those
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Old 01-23-2006, 08:15 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I really dislike the song. Really. Sorry, but I think it's awful. The chorus is awful, especially the (just sex) part. Terrible, corny and blah. (Blah is the only way to describe it.) I think any song that either you or madeinNY creates now is just a big kiss ass session, and it's getting annoying. I think that's why no one reviews, because of people like this. If I was you I'd wish for writers block, to prevent you from posting stuff like this.
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Old 01-23-2006, 09:02 PM   #13 (permalink)
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How is the (Just sex) part really awful?

How is this a big kiss ass session?
I dont "kiss ass"
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Old 01-23-2006, 09:05 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Because if one of you posts a song the other loves it and worships you for it, I pretty much agree with everything hobojesus said.
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Old 01-23-2006, 09:07 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Thats not true. We give advice & we try to help to fix it if we dont like it totally, not just going to say "i ****ing hate your poem". I worship no ****ing one. What the hell are you talking about?! When i post poems/song-like-poems, im looking for advice from anyone, who will help me make it better. I dont control what people reply/post. Maybe some of the other people are doing that, but not me.

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Old 01-24-2006, 01:40 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Yes you're right you can't expect anything else from me. I tell it like it is and I'm not going to soften the blow at all, and I expect people would do the same for me. You have posted songs in here that have been good, and then songs that have been bad, the same with madeinNY. But it just seems that when either of you two post up a song the thread just turns into a big kiss ass session, with either of you two really putting any effort into criticising the others work. It just ends up in 'well done crazy, haha, I wish I could write like you.' Or something along those lines. This stands more for madeinNY than for you, because you are generally quite good at criticising songs and are posting a lot on this forum which is good. But I think it should annoy both you and madeinNY aswell as me and Crowquill, because if people just keep on saying your stuff is good when it's actually not, then what type of advice is that? Me saying that your stuff was weak is much better for you in the long run. You'll see.
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Old 01-24-2006, 01:44 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Well that's just what I thought of her song. I wasn't kissing her ass or trying to.


Forum=diversity
Me=contributing to that.
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Old 01-24-2006, 01:51 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Well you have said every one of her songs has been utterly fantastic.

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You=Kissing it
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Old 01-24-2006, 01:53 PM   #19 (permalink)
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No. I criticized a few, but some I just liked and didn't think anything had to be done with them.

But to be on topic...crazy, the (just sex) part did seem a little out of place...
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Old 01-24-2006, 01:56 PM   #20 (permalink)
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I can't actually remember you ever criticising any... and if they were they were only minor.

And the just sex part was very corny. Not 'a little out of place'-corny.

See-that's how you criticise.
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