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Old 01-26-2006, 01:58 PM   #21 (permalink)
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Yes you're right you can't expect anything else from me. I tell it like it is and I'm not going to soften the blow at all, and I expect people would do the same for me. You have posted songs in here that have been good, and then songs that have been bad, the same with madeinNY. But it just seems that when either of you two post up a song the thread just turns into a big kiss ass session, with either of you two really putting any effort into criticising the others work. It just ends up in 'well done crazy, haha, I wish I could write like you.' Or something along those lines. This stands more for madeinNY than for you, because you are generally quite good at criticising songs and are posting a lot on this forum which is good. But I think it should annoy both you and madeinNY aswell as me and Crowquill, because if people just keep on saying your stuff is good when it's actually not, then what type of advice is that? Me saying that your stuff was weak is much better for you in the long run. You'll see.
i dont want you to soften the blow, things would get boring if everyone was nice nice huggy huggy kissy kissy...yea. I dont want ppl to always say my stuff are good when i know it needs fixing though. Exactly why i put it on here. Cause i know theres some *******s( ) that will criticise. But i also want them to try to think of something that can help it or something. not trash it totally.

okay, so can you think of anything to replace the "just sex" part?
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Old 01-28-2006, 01:46 AM   #22 (permalink)
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I don't think those bracketted parts are needed at all. Just cut them out.
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Old 01-31-2006, 09:13 PM   #23 (permalink)
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I might just do that, thanks for the idea. in those "chorus-like" parts, i was just trying to explain how their "relationship" is just based on sex, no feelings attached & how she now has love-like feelings for him.
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Old 02-01-2006, 02:31 AM   #24 (permalink)
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Well I don't really think stupid bracketted parts are the way to go with that. Maybe add another verse or something?
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