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Old 01-30-2006, 01:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Solitary Open Air We Don't Live Cos We Don't Care

I've been in my car with the windows down/
A bright light started swirling and it threw us around/
where did my left shoe go?/
I've asked that girl, but she says she don't know/
What are these sounds on the radio?/
Sounds like music that I guess we don't know/
The bright light turns green/
all I can hear is the car scream/
and it starts to fade like clouds and the clouds fade aswell/
I guess we're going to hell

Seventeen years not one spent/
living full to the edge what is life meant/
I'm crawling but the light will not disappear/
it just keeps on shining and it shines through my fears/
what are your aches and pains?/
if we told you we weren't coming then what would you gain?/
Nothing I guess that we just don't know/
But what do we know?/
I know we don't know/

Honking my horn with the bells on/
there's a field over there that we're driving along/
the blue man speaks in several tongues/
if we all stay quiet then we'll have more fun/
where is Kimmy with my shotgun?/
she said she'll be back but now she's on a run/
forgot to pack my bullets and now we're lost/
with the bright green light take your life what would it cost?/
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Old 01-30-2006, 03:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The last verse was my favorite...

It seems like a rap to me..is it?
It kinda sounds like those raps you hear on tv about staying in school or not doing drugs or how its important to have a dream...y'know what I'm saying?

Not that its even close to being about any of those things, I just think it would SOUND a lot like them...not in a lyrical sense.
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Old 01-31-2006, 12:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Wow... I'm forgettful. I can'r even remember what this song sounded like in my head. It definetly weren't a rap-i think it was my own brand of music entitled 'hobogroove.'
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Old 01-31-2006, 02:06 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well if you ever record it, I'm interested in hearing it..happy sailings :]
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