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Old 02-02-2006, 10:38 AM   #1 (permalink)
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so this is reconciliation,
for past wrongs by one once loved,
to drift apathetically
into the familiar, the reproduced.

does it seem uncanny, the resemblence
to where you've been before,
lest you forget the dissonence
of loving beneath the storm.

love couldn't fix it,
hope's crashed and burned,
faith's beyond you're inhibitions,
listless, fallen, blackened.

couldn't live without the abuse,
its become a comfort in unsure times
famliarity breeds sanity,
sanity's becoming a choking fume,
the clouds advance,
breathe deep, my sweet.
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Old 02-03-2006, 03:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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into the familiar, the reproduced.

does it seem uncanny, the resemblence
to where you've been before,
this is what I felt while reading this. Mediocre at best. I know you can do better dude, you have done better. This one feels forced. I did like the possible meanings of this line however :
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faith's beyond you're inhibitions
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