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Old 05-17-2006, 09:16 PM   #21 (permalink)
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People don't post songs that they know are complete sh*t.
Not even you.
considering i did say i liked the ending.. anyways i post stuff cause i can handle and i'm always up for whatever people can say about my writings, bad or good.. And trust me 100% i never expect anything good.
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:17 PM   #22 (permalink)
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So instead of posting the filler sh*t, and the good ending, why not eliminate the filler, replace it with good writing, and add it to your ending? Makes sense to me.
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:20 PM   #23 (permalink)
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So instead of posting the filler sh*t, and the good ending, why not eliminate the filler, replace it with good writing, and add it to your ending? Makes sense to me.
yes thats my plan. I writ things such as this, and i always think my writings aside from a line or two are crap.. but people have different opinions.. so in saying that i posted this not really trusting my own thoughts completely, i wait for other people to post there thoughts.. i was hoping someone would make me pissed off or somthing so i could write and maybe fix it.. (anger helps.. and depression..all of which i'm not right now) so i'm stuck.
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Why post something you don't like?
Don't write for these people.
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:27 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Why post something you don't like?
Don't write for these people.
why do you keep asking the same question over and over again? i've explained it as much as possible.. now shush. And don't write for what people? I write for no one but myself..
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If you only write for youself, then why did you just say that you post it here because there may be someone who likes it, even though you don't?

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but people have different opinions.. so in saying that i posted this not really trusting my own thoughts completely, i wait for other people to post there thoughts..
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:29 PM   #27 (permalink)
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If you only write for youself, then why did you just say that you post it here because there may be someone who likes it, even though you don't?
I just like to here people's opinions on stuff bad or good.. maybe it can help me a little.. whats so hard to understand?

don't ask such stupid questions.. if your going to ask that you might as well ask everyone who post songs.. why do you write for these people? because there posting and wanting people's opinions it means there writing for people other then themselves?
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:32 PM   #28 (permalink)
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You said you thought your song was sh*t except the ending.
I asked why you didn't fix it so that it was all good instead of just the ending.
You said that someone else here might like it.
I said not to write for these people, make sure what you write is good in your own opinion.
You said you only write for yourself.
I then quoted you earlier saying that you posted it because someone else might like it.

You have never answered the first question.
If you write only for yourself, then why would you post a song that you don't like?
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:34 PM   #29 (permalink)
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You said you thought your song was sh*t except the ending.
I asked why you didn't fix it so that it was all good instead of just the ending.
You said that someone else here might like it.
I said not to write for these people, make sure what you write is good in your own opinion.
You said you only write for yourself.
I then quoted you earlier saying that you posted it because someone else might like it.

You have never answered the first question.
If you write only for yourself, then why would you post a song that you don't like?
I like the ending, I don't dig the rest of the song, its filler. Like i've said, as you know. I wanted peoples opinions on the rest of the song the - the ending, so i can fix up the filler.
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Old 05-17-2006, 09:37 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Filler means you didn't even try to make it good.
Why would you want something you know isn't the best you can do critiqued? Do the best that you can possibly do, and then listen to ways to improve upon that. That is how you improve your writing. Not by posting something you know is sh*t just to fill up a song.
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